Date: Fri, 30 Apr 2010 00:01:23 -0700 From: Xin LI <delphij@gmail.com> To: Ben Kaduk <minimarmot@gmail.com> Cc: svn-src-head@freebsd.org, svn-src-all@freebsd.org, src-committers@freebsd.org, Xin LI <delphij@freebsd.org> Subject: Re: svn commit: r207283 - head/usr.bin/gzip Message-ID: <w2oa78074951004300001l9047051ejf3a924f94b49da38@mail.gmail.com> In-Reply-To: <q2w47d0403c1004271055yec72d9d5g734e2bce3b6cae21@mail.gmail.com> References: <201004271750.o3RHoi8G078883@svn.freebsd.org> <q2w47d0403c1004271055yec72d9d5g734e2bce3b6cae21@mail.gmail.com>
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Hi, Ben, On Tue, Apr 27, 2010 at 10:55 AM, Ben Kaduk <minimarmot@gmail.com> wrote: > On Tue, Apr 27, 2010 at 1:50 PM, Xin LI <delphij@freebsd.org> wrote: >> Author: delphij >> Date: Tue Apr 27 17:50:43 2010 >> New Revision: 207283 >> URL: http://svn.freebsd.org/changeset/base/207283 >> >> Log: >> =C2=A0Language improvements to make the BUGS section easier to read. >> >> =C2=A0Reviewed by: =C2=A0Alexander Best <alexbestms wwu de> >> =C2=A0MFC after: =C2=A0 =C2=A013 days >> >> Modified: >> =C2=A0head/usr.bin/gzip/gzip.1 >> >> Modified: head/usr.bin/gzip/gzip.1 >> =3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D= =3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D= =3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D=3D= =3D=3D=3D=3D >> --- head/usr.bin/gzip/gzip.1 =C2=A0 =C2=A0Tue Apr 27 15:59:38 2010 =C2= =A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0(r207282) >> +++ head/usr.bin/gzip/gzip.1 =C2=A0 =C2=A0Tue Apr 27 17:50:43 2010 =C2= =A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0(r207283) >> @@ -218,8 +218,8 @@ with unpack support written by >> =C2=A0.An Xin LI Aq delphij@FreeBSD.org . >> =C2=A0.Sh BUGS >> =C2=A0According to RFC 1952, the recorded file size is stored in a 32-bi= t >> -integer and therefore it can not represent files that is bigger than >> -4GB in size. =C2=A0This limitation also applies to >> +integer, therefore, it can not represent files larger than 4GB. >> +This limitation also applies to > > Still not quite right -- the old version was wrong because it had > "files that is" instead of "files that are". =C2=A0The new version has a > comma splice, though -- the comma in "32-bit integer, therefore" > should be replaced with either a semicolon or a full stop. > > I would probably also put in two "the"s in the text following this > change -- "the -l option" and "the gzip utility". I would appreciate some native English speaking committers to help me on this, I personally have no much strong opinion on the wording :-/ >> =C2=A0.Fl l >> =C2=A0option of >> =C2=A0.Nm >> _______________________________________________ >> svn-src-head@freebsd.org mailing list >> http://lists.freebsd.org/mailman/listinfo/svn-src-head >> To unsubscribe, send any mail to "svn-src-head-unsubscribe@freebsd.org" >> > --=20 Xin LI <delphij@delphij.net> http://www.delphij.net
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