Date: Sun, 26 May 2002 10:09:36 +0100 (BST) From: Dominic Marks <dominic_marks@btinternet.com> To: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org Subject: docs/38568: Minor improvements to PPPoA section Message-ID: <20020526090936.012325F1@host217-39-131-156.in-addr.btopenworld.com>
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>Number: 38568
>Category: docs
>Synopsis: Minor improvements to PPPoA section
>Confidential: no
>Severity: non-critical
>Priority: low
>Responsible: freebsd-doc
>State: open
>Quarter:
>Keywords:
>Date-Required:
>Class: doc-bug
>Submitter-Id: current-users
>Arrival-Date: Sun May 26 02:10:02 PDT 2002
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator: Dominic Marks
>Release: FreeBSD 4.6-RC i386
>Organization:
Student
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD 4.6-RC i386
>Description:
In my latest update to the PPPoA section two minor errors sliped in.
One was a label reverse-truncated by three characters. And a space
in a command example went missing.
>How-To-Repeat:
NA.
>Fix:
Index: chapter.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ppp-and-slip/chapter.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.76
diff -u -r1.76 chapter.sgml
--- chapter.sgml 2002/05/19 11:14:02 1.76
+++ chapter.sgml 2002/05/26 08:54:15
@@ -2153,7 +2153,7 @@
<programlisting>default:
load adsl
-l:
+adsl:
new -i ng0 adsl adsl
set bundle authname <replaceable>username</replaceable> <co
id="co-mpd-ex-user">
@@ -2200,7 +2200,7 @@
<para>It is possible to initialise the connection easily by issuing the
following command as <username>root</username>.</para>
- <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>mpd -b</userinput><replaceable>adsl</replaceable></screen>
+ <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>mpd -b</userinput> <replaceable>adsl</replaceable></screen>
<para>You can see the status of the connection with the following
command.</para>
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