Date: Thu, 13 Nov 2003 17:54:58 +0000 From: Ceri Davies <setantae@submonkey.net> To: Wes Peters <wes@softweyr.com> Cc: docs@freebsd.org Subject: Re: Did I get this right? Message-ID: <20031113175458.GS60410@submonkey.net> In-Reply-To: <200311130834.48467.wes@softweyr.com> References: <200311120953.35785.wes@softweyr.com> <20031112202021.GK60410@submonkey.net> <200311130834.48467.wes@softweyr.com>
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[-- Attachment #1 --] On Thu, Nov 13, 2003 at 08:34:48AM -0800, Wes Peters wrote: > On Wednesday 12 November 2003 12:20, Ceri Davies wrote: > > On Wed, Nov 12, 2003 at 09:53:35AM -0800, Wes Peters wrote: > > > I added a section about CUPS, mostly cribbed from the pkg-descr, to > > > the handbook printing chapter. I'm pretty fuzzy with doc tools and > > > such, and therefore need a thorough review. Please have at me over > > > the attached diff, and thanks in advance. ;^) > > > > Hi Wes, > > > > Thanks for knocking this together, but just to be cruel I'm going to > > pick your patch apart - don't let it put you off ;-) > > No, thanks for the review. Sometimes just knowing what to look for is > half the challenge. Attached you will find my second attempt with all > the problems you noted fixed, plus an additional <application> I > spotted as I was editing. Thanks! Looks good for committing, but I still have a couple of whitespace nits, I'm afraid, which are inline below. > Index: chapter.sgml > =================================================================== > RCS file: /home/dcvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/printing/chapter.sgml,v > retrieving revision 1.81 > diff -u -w -u -w -r1.81 chapter.sgml > --- chapter.sgml 5 Nov 2003 10:36:55 -0000 1.81 > +++ chapter.sgml 13 Nov 2003 16:32:54 -0000 > @@ -4585,6 +4585,29 @@ > url="http://www.lprng.org/"></ulink>.</para>; > </listitem> > </varlistentry> > + <varlistentry> > + <term>CUPS</term> > + > + <indexterm><primary>CUPS</primary></indexterm> > + <listitem> > + <para><application>CUPS</application>, the Common UNIX Printing > + System, provides a portable printing layer for &unix;-based > + operating systems. It has been developed by Easy Software > + Products to promote a standard printing solution for all &unix; > + vendors and users.</para> > + <para><application>CUPS</application> uses the Internet Printing Please add another newline between </para> and <para>. > + Protocol (<acronym>IPP</acronym>) as the basis for managing > + print jobs and queues. The Line Printer Daemon ^ Add another space. > + (<acronym>LPD</acronym>) Server Message Block > + (<acronym>SMB</acronym>), and AppSocket (a.k.a. JetDirect) > + protocols are also supported with reduced functionality. CUPS > + adds network printer browsing and PostScript Printer Description > + (<acronym>PPD</acronym>) based printing options to support > + real-world printing under &unix;.</para> > + <para>The main site for <application>CUPS</application> is <ulink Add another newline after </para>. That's it, cheers. Ceri -- [-- Attachment #2 --] -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v1.2.3 (FreeBSD) iD8DBQE/s8VyocfcwTS3JF8RAjNMAKCA7dmIXoBPe6fYSWGMoysbKtTdSQCbBTax QD95o6zHP4CtLThBhyZXeMc= =9I51 -----END PGP SIGNATURE-----help
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