Date: Tue, 23 Jul 2002 09:39:18 -0400 From: Chris Pepper <pepper@reppep.com> To: Ceri Davies <ceri@FreeBSD.org> Cc: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: docs/40910: [PATCH] Typos & grammer fixes for /usr/share/man/man8/moused.8.gz Message-ID: <a05200300b9630cf273a8@[64.81.19.109]> In-Reply-To: <200207230910.g6N9ABhO020585@freefall.freebsd.org> References: <200207230910.g6N9ABhO020585@freefall.freebsd.org>
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At 2:10 AM -0700 2002/07/23, Ceri Davies wrote: >The following reply was made to PR docs/40910; it has been noted by GNATS. > >From: Ceri Davies <ceri@FreeBSD.org> >To: Chris Pepper <pepper@rockefeller.edu> >Cc: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org >Subject: Re: docs/40910: [PATCH] Typos & grammer fixes for >/usr/share/man/man8/moused.8.gz >Date: Tue, 23 Jul 2002 10:07:20 +0100 > > On Mon, Jul 22, 2002 at 10:52:01PM -0400, Chris Pepper said: > > > > >Description: > > The moused man page has typos & grammar errors. > > Hi Chris, > > Just two comments on this patch. > > > If the mouse daemon receives the signal > > .Dv SIGHUP , > > -it will reopen the mouse port and reinitializes itself. > > -Useful if > > +it reopens the mouse port and reinitializes itself. > > +This is useful if > > the mouse is attached/detached while the system is suspended. > > I'd prefer : > > If the mouse daemon receives the signal > .Dv SIGHUP , > -it will reopen the mouse port and reinitializes itself. > -Useful if > +it will reopen the mouse port and reinitialize itself. > +This is useful if > > Comments ? > > Everything else in this PR looks good to me. That looks good to me as well. Chris -- Chris Pepper: <http://www.reppep.com/~pepper/>; Rockefeller University: <http://www.rockefeller.edu/>; To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe freebsd-doc" in the body of the message
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