Date: Tue, 7 Dec 2004 16:11:15 -0500 (EST) From: Hiten Pandya <hmp@freebsd.org> To: Ceri Davies <ceri@submonkey.net> Cc: cvs-all@freebsd.org Subject: Re: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mac chapter.sgml Message-ID: <Pine.NEB.3.96L.1041207161049.53441A-100000@fledge.watson.org> In-Reply-To: <20041207210237.GQ513@submonkey.net>
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That's even better, I will make the change shortly. Thanks Ceri and Tom! Hiten Pandya hmp at freebsd.org On Tue, 7 Dec 2004, Ceri Davies wrote: :On Tue, Dec 07, 2004 at 07:28:34PM +0000, Hiten Pandya wrote: :> hmp 2004-12-07 19:28:34 UTC :> :> FreeBSD doc repository :> :> Modified files: :> en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mac chapter.sgml :> Log: :> Correct last commit. :> :> Noticed by: trhodes, ceri : :Thanks Hiten. I still think the sentence is still backwards though. : :> | @@ -222,7 +222,7 @@ :> | discussing <acronym>MLS</acronym>. A sensitivity level is :> | a term used to describe how important or secret the data :> | should be. As the sensitivity level increases, so does the :> | - importance of the secrecy (or confidentiality) of the date.</para> :> | + importance of the secrecy, or confidentiality of the data.</para> : :I think it should read: : :As the confidentiality of the data or importance of the secrecy :increases, so does the sensitivity level. : :Ceri :-- :Only two things are infinite, the universe and human stupidity, and I'm :not sure about the former. -- Einstein (attrib.) :
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