Date: Thu, 10 Jan 2008 22:44:00 +0100 (CET) From: Marcin Cieslak <saper@SYSTEM.PL> To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org Subject: docs/119545: books/arch-handbook/usb/chapter.sgml formatting Message-ID: <200801102144.m0ALi0Ui025144@radziecki.saper.info> Resent-Message-ID: <200801102220.m0AMK2Q9038684@freefall.freebsd.org>
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>Number: 119545
>Category: docs
>Synopsis: books/arch-handbook/usb/chapter.sgml formatting
>Confidential: no
>Severity: serious
>Priority: medium
>Responsible: freebsd-doc
>State: open
>Quarter:
>Keywords:
>Date-Required:
>Class: doc-bug
>Submitter-Id: current-users
>Arrival-Date: Thu Jan 10 22:20:02 UTC 2008
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator: Marcin Cieslak
>Release: FreeBSD 7.0-PRERELEASE amd64
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD radziecki.saper.info 7.0-PRERELEASE FreeBSD 7.0-PRERELEASE #7: Sun Jan 6 03:23:21 CET 2008 saper@radziecki.saper.info:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/VAIO amd64
>Description:
The USB chapter of the Architecture Handbook contains some strange markup:
1) Missing reference [ 2] in "Access to these registers is provided through a virtualised hub
as suggested in the USB specification [ 2]"
2) In the OCHI chapter: typo
"to which aqueue of transfer descriptors"
should probably be "to which a queue ..."
3) In the OHCI chapter:
<para>framelist interruptisochronous control bulk</para>
Should this be some form of a graph?
3) In the "Device Information chapter":
<para>Level 0 Level 1 Level 2 Slot 0</para>
<para>Slot 3 Slot 2 Slot 1</para>
<para>(Only 4 out of 32 slots shown)</para>
Another graphing attempt?
>How-To-Repeat:
>Fix:
Difficult to fix (except for 2) without knowing original author's intent.
>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
>Unformatted:
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