Date: Wed, 2 Oct 2013 23:10:04 -0400 (EDT) From: Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@MIT.EDU> To: freebsd@allanjude.com Cc: svn-doc-projects@freebsd.org, doc-committers@freebsd.org Subject: Re: svn commit: r42807 - projects/zfsupdate-201307/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/zfs Message-ID: <alpine.GSO.1.10.1310022306480.16692@multics.mit.edu> In-Reply-To: <201310021753.r92HrmFV064157@svn.freebsd.org> References: <201310021753.r92HrmFV064157@svn.freebsd.org>
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On Wed, 2 Oct 2013, Benedict Reuschling wrote: > Author: bcr > Date: Wed Oct 2 17:53:48 2013 > New Revision: 42807 > URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42807 > > Log: > Add basic information about ZFS delegation and small corrections to other > parts. > > Submitted by: Allan Jude > > Modified: > projects/zfsupdate-201307/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/zfs/chapter.xml > > Modified: projects/zfsupdate-201307/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/zfs/chapter.xml > ============================================================================== > --- projects/zfsupdate-201307/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/zfs/chapter.xml Wed Oct 2 16:19:37 2013 (r42806) > +++ projects/zfsupdate-201307/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/zfs/chapter.xml Wed Oct 2 17:53:48 2013 (r42807) > <para>A volume can be formatted with any filesystem on top of > - it. This will appear to the user as if they are working with > - that specific filesystem and not ZFS. This way, it can be > - used to augment non-ZFS filesystems with ZFS features that > - they do not have. For example, combining the ZFS compression > - property together with a 250 MB volume allows to create a > - compressed FAT filesystem.</para> > + it. This will appear to the user as if they are working with > + a regular disk using that specific filesystem and not ZFS. > + In this way, non-ZFS file systems can be augmented with > + ZFS features that they would not normally have. For example, > + combining the ZFS compression property together with a > + 250 MB volume allows to create a compressed FAT > + filesystem.</para> This last sentence seems to be incorrect grammar, as the verb "allows" requires a direct object, as in "allows the user to create". It's probably better to just rewrite it as "allows creation of", though. -Benhelp
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