Date: Sun, 22 Jun 2025 04:32:59 GMT From: Colin Percival <cperciva@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@FreeBSD.org, dev-commits-doc-all@FreeBSD.org Subject: git: 76f5a5635a - main - releases: Fix punctuation Message-ID: <202506220432.55M4Wx3o014599@gitrepo.freebsd.org>
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The branch main has been updated by cperciva: URL: https://cgit.FreeBSD.org/doc/commit/?id=76f5a5635a23c24c5f4a1031b54f429e9a2a6f3d commit 76f5a5635a23c24c5f4a1031b54f429e9a2a6f3d Author: Colin Percival <cperciva@FreeBSD.org> AuthorDate: 2025-06-22 04:28:20 +0000 Commit: Colin Percival <cperciva@FreeBSD.org> CommitDate: 2025-06-22 04:32:23 +0000 releases: Fix punctuation Nonessential information in a sentence can be set off by preceding *and following* it with commas. While we're here, avoid unnecessarily splitting a sentence across lines. Co-authored-by: Graham Perrin --- website/archetypes/release/_index.adoc | 2 +- website/content/en/releases/13.0R/_index.adoc | 2 +- website/content/en/releases/13.1R/_index.adoc | 2 +- website/content/en/releases/13.2R/_index.adoc | 3 +-- website/content/en/releases/13.3R/_index.adoc | 2 +- website/content/en/releases/13.4R/_index.adoc | 3 +-- website/content/en/releases/13.5R/_index.adoc | 2 +- website/content/en/releases/14.0R/_index.adoc | 2 +- website/content/en/releases/14.1R/_index.adoc | 3 +-- website/content/en/releases/14.3R/_index.adoc | 3 +-- website/content/en/releases/15.0R/_index.adoc | 2 +- 11 files changed, 11 insertions(+), 15 deletions(-) diff --git a/website/archetypes/release/_index.adoc b/website/archetypes/release/_index.adoc index 606ebd91b8..ff17469ef5 100644 --- a/website/archetypes/release/_index.adoc +++ b/website/archetypes/release/_index.adoc @@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ For more information about the release engineering process, please see the link: More detailed information //, such as release notes -// and hardware notes +// and hardware notes, can be found at these pages: //link:announce/[FreeBSD {localRel}-RELEASE announcement] + diff --git a/website/content/en/releases/13.0R/_index.adoc b/website/content/en/releases/13.0R/_index.adoc index 3f722cd9ef..630b04cb2f 100644 --- a/website/content/en/releases/13.0R/_index.adoc +++ b/website/content/en/releases/13.0R/_index.adoc @@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ For more information about the release engineering process, please see the link: == Detailed Information -More detailed information, such as release notes and hardware notes can be found at these pages: +More detailed information, such as release notes and hardware notes, can be found at these pages: link:announce/[FreeBSD {localRel}-RELEASE announcement] + link:signatures/[FreeBSD {localRel}-RELEASE signed checksum files] + diff --git a/website/content/en/releases/13.1R/_index.adoc b/website/content/en/releases/13.1R/_index.adoc index 69342ebe9b..82ece08200 100644 --- a/website/content/en/releases/13.1R/_index.adoc +++ b/website/content/en/releases/13.1R/_index.adoc @@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ For more information about the release engineering process, please see the link: == Detailed Information -More detailed information, such as release notes and hardware notes can be found at these pages: +More detailed information, such as release notes and hardware notes, can be found at these pages: link:announce/[FreeBSD {localRel}-RELEASE announcement] + link:signatures/[FreeBSD {localRel}-RELEASE signed checksum files] + diff --git a/website/content/en/releases/13.2R/_index.adoc b/website/content/en/releases/13.2R/_index.adoc index 18ae91a057..f484350787 100644 --- a/website/content/en/releases/13.2R/_index.adoc +++ b/website/content/en/releases/13.2R/_index.adoc @@ -16,8 +16,7 @@ For more information about the release engineering process, please see the link: == Detailed Information -More detailed information, such as release notes and hardware notes -can be found at these pages: +More detailed information, such as release notes and hardware notes, can be found at these pages: link:announce/[FreeBSD {localRel}-RELEASE announcement] + link:signatures/[FreeBSD {localRel}-RELEASE signed checksum files] + diff --git a/website/content/en/releases/13.3R/_index.adoc b/website/content/en/releases/13.3R/_index.adoc index 1836ff59e6..3a7f7f2228 100644 --- a/website/content/en/releases/13.3R/_index.adoc +++ b/website/content/en/releases/13.3R/_index.adoc @@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ For more information about the release engineering process, please see the link: == Detailed Information -More detailed information, such as release notes and hardware notes can be found at these pages: +More detailed information, such as release notes and hardware notes, can be found at these pages: link:announce/[FreeBSD {localRel}-RELEASE announcement] + link:signatures/[FreeBSD {localRel}-RELEASE signed checksum files] + diff --git a/website/content/en/releases/13.4R/_index.adoc b/website/content/en/releases/13.4R/_index.adoc index d5cce4ca8e..7760e7392b 100644 --- a/website/content/en/releases/13.4R/_index.adoc +++ b/website/content/en/releases/13.4R/_index.adoc @@ -16,8 +16,7 @@ For more information about the release engineering process, please see the link: == Detailed Information -More detailed information, such as release notes and hardware notes, -can be found at these pages: +More detailed information, such as release notes and hardware notes, can be found at these pages: link:announce/[FreeBSD {localRel}-RELEASE announcement] + link:signatures/[FreeBSD {localRel}-RELEASE signed checksum files] + diff --git a/website/content/en/releases/13.5R/_index.adoc b/website/content/en/releases/13.5R/_index.adoc index 11a691aa2b..5fa815d2ff 100644 --- a/website/content/en/releases/13.5R/_index.adoc +++ b/website/content/en/releases/13.5R/_index.adoc @@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ For more information about the release engineering process, please see the link: == Detailed Information -More detailed information, such as release notes and hardware notes can be found at these pages: +More detailed information, such as release notes and hardware notes, can be found at these pages: link:announce/[FreeBSD {localRel}-RELEASE announcement] + link:signatures/[FreeBSD {localRel}-RELEASE signed checksum files] + diff --git a/website/content/en/releases/14.0R/_index.adoc b/website/content/en/releases/14.0R/_index.adoc index 8be3fd0905..6c93949f60 100644 --- a/website/content/en/releases/14.0R/_index.adoc +++ b/website/content/en/releases/14.0R/_index.adoc @@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ For more information about the release engineering process, please see the link: == Detailed Information -More detailed information, such as release notes and hardware notes can be found at these pages: +More detailed information, such as release notes and hardware notes, can be found at these pages: link:announce/[FreeBSD {localRel}-RELEASE announcement] + link:signatures/[FreeBSD {localRel}-RELEASE signed checksum files] + diff --git a/website/content/en/releases/14.1R/_index.adoc b/website/content/en/releases/14.1R/_index.adoc index 30c4f8e6a3..fbf528ceb1 100644 --- a/website/content/en/releases/14.1R/_index.adoc +++ b/website/content/en/releases/14.1R/_index.adoc @@ -16,8 +16,7 @@ For more information about the release engineering process, please see the link: == Detailed Information -More detailed information, such as release notes and hardware notes, -can be found at these pages: +More detailed information, such as release notes and hardware notes, can be found at these pages: link:announce/[FreeBSD {localRel}-RELEASE announcement] + link:signatures/[FreeBSD {localRel}-RELEASE signed checksum files] + diff --git a/website/content/en/releases/14.3R/_index.adoc b/website/content/en/releases/14.3R/_index.adoc index b8a2a8a486..dbc3c5bea4 100644 --- a/website/content/en/releases/14.3R/_index.adoc +++ b/website/content/en/releases/14.3R/_index.adoc @@ -16,8 +16,7 @@ For more information about the release engineering process, please see the link: == Detailed Information -More detailed information, such as release notes and hardware notes, -can be found at these pages: +More detailed information, such as release notes and hardware notes, can be found at these pages: link:announce/[FreeBSD {localRel}-RELEASE announcement] + link:signatures/[FreeBSD {localRel}-RELEASE signed checksum files] + diff --git a/website/content/en/releases/15.0R/_index.adoc b/website/content/en/releases/15.0R/_index.adoc index 76ebd9328c..54243d1fa3 100644 --- a/website/content/en/releases/15.0R/_index.adoc +++ b/website/content/en/releases/15.0R/_index.adoc @@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ For more information about the release engineering process, please see the link: More detailed information //, such as release notes -// and hardware notes +// and hardware notes, can be found at these pages: //link:announce/[FreeBSD {localRel}-RELEASE announcement] +
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