Date: Sat, 30 Jun 2007 22:41:08 GMT From: minimarmot@gmail.com To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org Subject: docs/114174: nit in handbook -- install chapter Message-ID: <200706302241.l5UMf8lV001408@prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu> Resent-Message-ID: <200706302310.l5UNA6Gs086642@freefall.freebsd.org>
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>Number: 114174 >Category: docs >Synopsis: nit in handbook -- install chapter >Confidential: no >Severity: non-critical >Priority: low >Responsible: freebsd-doc >State: open >Quarter: >Keywords: >Date-Required: >Class: doc-bug >Submitter-Id: current-users >Arrival-Date: Sat Jun 30 23:10:04 GMT 2007 >Closed-Date: >Last-Modified: >Originator: Benjamin Kaduk >Release: FreeBSD 7.0-CURRENT i386 >Organization: >Environment: System: FreeBSD prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu 7.0-CURRENT FreeBSD 7.0-CURRENT #1: Sun Apr 1 16:59:00 UTC 2007 kaduk@prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/GENERIC i386 >Description: the phrase ``sum up'' is used as a verb, which, though common usage may accept, is stylistically inconsistent with the rest of the text. >How-To-Repeat: http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install-hardware.html >Fix: --- chapter.sgml.orig Sat Jun 30 17:15:48 2007 +++ chapter.sgml Sat Jun 30 17:23:11 2007 @ -96,7 +96,7 @@ <para>Information about the minimal configuration is available in the Installation Notes on the <ulink url="http://www.FreeBSD.org/releases/index.html">Release - Information</ulink> page of the &os; web site. A sum up of + Information</ulink> page of the &os; web site. A summary of this information is given in the following sections. Depending on the method you choose to install &os;, you may also need a floppy drive, a supported CDROM drive, and in some >Release-Note: >Audit-Trail: >Unformatted:
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