Date: Sun, 3 Aug 2003 14:45:29 -0700 (PDT) From: Murray Stokely <murray@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@FreeBSD.org, cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org Subject: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/multimedia chapter.sgml Message-ID: <200308032145.h73LjTun043906@repoman.freebsd.org>
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murray 2003/08/03 14:45:29 PDT
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Modified files:
en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/multimedia chapter.sgml
Log:
* Multiple grammar fixes.
* Reword first person sentences.
* Add missing words.
* Remove duplicate words.
* "Do this.." -> "type this .."
The video section of this chapter still needs a LOT of work.
Sponsored by: FreeBSD Mall, Inc.
Revision Changes Path
1.53 +23 -29 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/multimedia/chapter.sgml
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