Date: Tue, 21 May 2013 13:31:39 -0400 From: Tom Rhodes <trhodes@FreeBSD.org> To: bcr@FreeBSD.org Cc: wblock@wonkity.com, svn-doc-projects@FreeBSD.org, doc-committers@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: svn commit: r41667 - in projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook: basics users Message-ID: <20130521133139.1b576acc.trhodes@FreeBSD.org> In-Reply-To: <519B8626.30405@FreeBSD.org> References: <201305190001.r4J01wQe092105@svn.freebsd.org> <alpine.BSF.2.00.1305210827060.79332@wonkity.com> <519B8626.30405@FreeBSD.org>
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On Tue, 21 May 2013 16:35:18 +0200 Benedict Reuschling <bcr@FreeBSD.org> wrote: > -----BEGIN PGP SIGNED MESSAGE----- > Hash: SHA1 > > Am 21.05.13 16:32, schrieb Warren Block: > > On Sun, 19 May 2013, Tom Rhodes wrote: > > > >> Author: trhodes Date: Sun May 19 00:01:57 2013 New Revision: > >> 41667 URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/41667 > >> > >> Log: Add more information on binary formats in basics. Add a > >> note about sudo in the users chapter. Add a section on using root > >> in the users chapter. > >> > >> Modified: > >> projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/basics/chapter.xml > >> > >> > >> > >> > projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/users/chapter.xml > >> > >> > >> Modified: > >> projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/basics/chapter.xml > >> > >> > >> > >> > ============================================================================== > >> > >> --- > >> projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/basics/chapter.xml > >> > >> > Sat May 18 23:44:23 2013 (r41666) +++ > >> projects/ISBN_1-57176-407-0/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/basics/chapter.xml > >> > >> > Sun May 19 00:01:57 2013 (r41667) @@ -302,6 +302,15 @@ > >> console none managing requests for hardware devices, > >> peripherals, memory, and CPU time fairly to each user.</para> > >> > >> + <para>Much more information about User Accounts is in the > >> chapter > > > > It seems odd to capitalize "user accounts" there. > > > >> + about <link linkend="users">accounts</link>. For now you > >> just + need to know that each person (user) who uses the > >> computer should be + given their own username and password. > >> The system keeps track + of the people using the computer > >> based on this username. Since + it is often the case that > >> several people are working on the same + project Unix also > >> provides groups. Several users can be placed > > > > Needs a comma after "project". > > > > Did not look at the rest, maybe later. > > Also, the use of "you" is discouraged in the handbook. Did I miss one? I swear I cleaned that entire patch up (re-wrote ~91% of it). Some things I removed were "you," missing markup, long lines, whitespace nits, bad wording, etc. Thanks, fixed locally!help
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