Date: Mon, 29 Jul 2013 21:44:11 -0400 (EDT) From: Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@MIT.EDU> To: Warren Block <wblock@freebsd.org> Cc: svn-doc-projects@freebsd.org, doc-committers@freebsd.org Subject: Re: svn commit: r42473 - projects/zfsupdate-201307/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/filesystems Message-ID: <alpine.GSO.1.10.1307292134470.24720@multics.mit.edu> In-Reply-To: <201307292228.r6TMSLA6059176@svn.freebsd.org> References: <201307292228.r6TMSLA6059176@svn.freebsd.org>
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On Mon, 29 Jul 2013, Warren Block wrote: > Author: wblock > Date: Mon Jul 29 22:28:20 2013 > New Revision: 42473 > URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42473 > > Log: > Update the ZFS section with Allan Jude's latest diff. > > Modified: projects/zfsupdate-201307/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/filesystems/chapter.xml > ============================================================================== > --- projects/zfsupdate-201307/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/filesystems/chapter.xml Mon Jul 29 21:34:24 2013 (r42472) > +++ projects/zfsupdate-201307/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/filesystems/chapter.xml Mon Jul 29 22:28:20 2013 (r42473) > @@ -402,26 +395,44 @@ [...] > ZFS can also create volumes, which are block devices. > Volumes have many of the same features, including > copy-on-write, snapshots, clones and > - checksumming.</entry> > + checksumming. Volumes can be useful for running other > + file system formats on top of ZFS, such as UFS or in > + the case of Virtualization or exporting > + <acronym>iSCSI</acronym> extents.</entry> I'm not entirely sure what's supposed to be going on in this sentence. Is "such as UFS or in the case of Virtualization or exporting iSCSI extents" just supposed to be a list, but commas omitted because the scope is already inside a comma-separated list? (Also, I don't see a need for "Virtualization" to be capitalized.) The outer list could use semicolons to make the different scopes clearer, but perhaps a rewrite is better. > </row> > @@ -710,10 +720,15 @@ > </row> > > <row> > - <entry valign="top"><anchor > - id="filesystems-zfs-term-resilver"/>Resilver</entry> > + <entry valign="top" > + id="filesystems-zfs-term-resilver">Resilver</entry> > > - <entry></entry> > + <entry>When a disk fails and must be replaced, the new > + disk must be filled with the data that was lost. This > + process of calculating and writing the missing data > + (using the parity information distributed across the > + remaining drives) to the new drive is called > + Resilvering.</entry> Likewise, does "Resilvering" need to be capitalized? -Ben > </row> > > </tbody>
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