Date: Mon, 23 Oct 2006 07:08:58 +0000 (UTC) From: Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@FreeBSD.org, cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org Subject: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/version-guide article.sgml Message-ID: <200610230708.k9N78wtq064883@repoman.freebsd.org>
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keramida 2006-10-23 07:08:58 UTC
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Modified files:
en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/version-guide article.sgml
Log:
o Reword a bit in a couple of places, to avoid using 'necessary' and
'need' twice in the same sentence.
o Replace <literal> tags with <emphasis> for `tag', `port' and
`package' (they are really used as FreeBSD-specific terms, not as
<literal> text here).
o Expand a paragraph with inline URIs, which result in pretty awkward
line breaks in PDF/PS output, to a <variablelist>. This separates
the URIs from the running text, and looks slightly prettier in print
output.
Revision Changes Path
1.10 +32 -18 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/version-guide/article.sgml
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