Date: Sat, 24 Mar 2007 03:16:47 +0200 From: Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@freebsd.org> To: Ganbold <ganbold@micom.mng.net> Cc: Daniel Gerzo <danger@freebsd.org>, doc-committers@freebsd.org, cvs-doc@freebsd.org, cvs-all@freebsd.org Subject: Re: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook Makefile book.sgml chapters.ent doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/jails chapter.sgml Message-ID: <20070324011647.GA18057@kobe.laptop> In-Reply-To: <46034FFC.60001@micom.mng.net> References: <200703222030.l2MKUJjp012740@repoman.freebsd.org> <46034FFC.60001@micom.mng.net>
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On 2007-03-23 11:56, Ganbold <ganbold@micom.mng.net> wrote: > Daniel Gerzo wrote: > >danger 2007-03-22 20:30:18 UTC > > Revision Changes Path > > 1.101 +1 -0 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/Makefile > > 1.170 +2 -0 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/book.sgml > > 1.36 +1 -0 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/chapters.ent > > 1.1 +463 -0 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/jails/chapter.sgml (new) > > Thanks for the great new chapter (one more chapter is added to my > translation work :(). > > The following sentence seems to be missing parentheses. > > <para>Attach to a running jail, from its host system, and run > a command inside the jail administrative tasks inside the > jail itself). > > It could be: > > <para>Attach to a running jail, from its host system, and run > a command inside the jail (administrative tasks inside the > jail itself). I have some local changes around this area. When we commit the patch, after Daniel's review, it's probably going to change a bit. But thanks for the careful reading :)
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