Date: Tue, 02 Dec 2008 22:46:25 +0200 From: Manolis Kiagias <sonic2000gr@gmail.com> To: Gabor PALI <pgj@FreeBSD.org> Cc: Tom Rhodes <trhodes@FreeBSD.org>, freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: RFR: A "Boot Time Splash Screens" Section to the Handbook Message-ID: <49359EA1.3080600@gmail.com> In-Reply-To: <49359784.504@FreeBSD.org> References: <493155ED.8020004@FreeBSD.org> <49316309.1050407@gmail.com> <49330A66.8040801@FreeBSD.org> <20081201091730.0ef555fa.trhodes@FreeBSD.org> <49359784.504@FreeBSD.org>
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Gabor PALI wrote: > >> Hope that helps. >> > > Of course! Thank you again. > > > Here is the next iteration: > > (patch version): > http://people.freebsd.org/~pgj/patches/2008/12/02/splash.screen.section.patch.diff > > (HTML version): > http://people.freebsd.org/~pgj/patches/2008/12/02/html/boot-blocks.html#BOOT-SPLASH > > > Regards, > :g > > I like the improvements too :) If I were to make a few changes (at the edge of these being doc-bikesheds): - Maybe find another way to describe the console login rather than "legacy virtual console login prompt". Although this may be very accurate I think it can be shortened sowewhat and still carry the same meaning. Esp. since it is mentioned a few times. - The word intensity is mentioned three times in a row "cycle through steps of changing intensity of the image, from bright intensity to a very dark intensity and over again." => I would probably change this to "cycle through steps of changing intensity of the image, from bright to very dark and over again." This is minor stuff of course, and as I said it might just be my own color. (off to find a nice boot screen for my Aspire one :) ) manolis@
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