Date: Fri, 4 Oct 2002 19:15:42 -0700 (PDT) From: Tom Rhodes <trhodes@FreeBSD.org> To: cvs-committers@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org Subject: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config chapter.sgml Message-ID: <200210050215.g952FgmU064946@freefall.freebsd.org>
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trhodes 2002/10/04 19:15:42 PDT
Modified files:
en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config chapter.sgml
Log:
Grammar nits. Remove dead words and redundant sentences. Reword a few areas to remove the
'you' which appeared in almost every other line. One quick markup fix.
Revision Changes Path
1.60 +70 -84 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.sgml
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