Date: Sat, 4 Dec 2004 19:55:21 -0500 From: Tom Rhodes <trhodes@FreeBSD.org> To: Murray Stokely <murray@FreeBSD.org> Cc: cvs-all@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook Makefile doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/firewalls Makefile chapter.sgml doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security chapter.sgml Message-ID: <20041204195521.6a5d33e1@localhost> In-Reply-To: <200412050014.iB50EMgA007188@repoman.freebsd.org> References: <200412050014.iB50EMgA007188@repoman.freebsd.org>
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On Sun, 5 Dec 2004 00:14:22 +0000 (UTC) Murray Stokely <murray@FreeBSD.org> wrote: > murray 2004-12-05 00:14:22 UTC > > FreeBSD doc repository > > Modified files: > en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook Makefile book.sgml chapters.ent > en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security chapter.sgml > Added files: > en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/firewalls Makefile chapter.sgml > Log: > Remove the bulging firewalls section from the security chapter into a > new chapter all its own, currently in the 'network communications' > part as chapter 24. > > Add a small paragraph at the bottom of the security chapter synopsis > noting that additional security topics are covered in the MAC chapter > and the Firewall chapter. > > While here add some missing punctuation, cleanup the whitespace, add > missing </para> tags, add a synopsis, and of course > s/<sectN/<sectN-1/. Thanks for letting me know you were doing this, it stomped all over the FAQ patch I had (still in discussion on -doc an reaching a resolution) along with my idea of sectioning off the security information (see the other discussion on -doc with Giorgos, Remko, etc). -- Tom Rhodes
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