Date: Tue, 9 Jul 2013 06:27:56 +0000 (UTC) From: Warren Block <wblock@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r42201 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/docbook-markup Message-ID: <201307090627.r696RuOg076372@svn.freebsd.org>
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Author: wblock Date: Tue Jul 9 06:27:56 2013 New Revision: 42201 URL: http://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/42201 Log: Remove a confusing paragraph whose net contribution is negative. Remove some from "Ports Collection", it's unnecessary. Make one example section consistent with the actual code. Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/docbook-markup/chapter.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/docbook-markup/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/docbook-markup/chapter.xml Tue Jul 9 06:18:31 2013 (r42200) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/docbook-markup/chapter.xml Tue Jul 9 06:27:56 2013 (r42201) @@ -60,7 +60,7 @@ should be presented.</para> <para>The DocBook <acronym>DTD</acronym> is available from the - Ports Collection in the + Ports Collection in the <filename role="package">textproc/docbook-xml-450</filename> port. It is automatically installed as part of the <filename role="package">textproc/docproj</filename> @@ -114,7 +114,7 @@ </note> <para>The &os; extensions are not (currently) in the - Ports Collection. They are stored in the &os; Subversion + Ports Collection. They are stored in the &os; Subversion tree, as <ulink url="http://svnweb.FreeBSD.org/doc/head/share/xml/freebsd.dtd">head/share/xml/freebsd.dtd</ulink>.</para>; </sect1> @@ -1225,9 +1225,6 @@ This is the file called 'foo2'</screen> This makes the generated output, especially <acronym>HTML</acronym>, appear visually better.</para> - <para>This can be confusing, and sometimes the choice is not - always clear. Hopefully this example makes it clearer.</para> - <example> <title>Applications, Commands, and Options</title> @@ -1320,7 +1317,7 @@ This is the file called 'foo2'</screen> </note> <para>To include the name of a program from the &os; - Ports Collection in the document, use the + Ports Collection in the document, use the <sgmltag>filename</sgmltag> tag with the <literal>role</literal> attribute set to <literal>package</literal>. Since ports can be installed in @@ -2167,8 +2164,8 @@ IMAGES= chapter1/fig1.png <sgmltag class="starttag">link linkend="introduction"</sgmltag>sample introduction<sgmltag class="endtag">link</sgmltag>.<sgmltag class="endtag">para</sgmltag> <sgmltag class="starttag">para</sgmltag>More specific information can be found in the - <sgmltag class="starttag">link linkend="introduction-moredetails"</sgmltag>sample introduction with - more details<sgmltag class="endtag">link</sgmltag> section.<sgmltag class="endtag">para</sgmltag></programlisting> + <sgmltag class="starttag">link linkend="introduction-moredetails"</sgmltag>sample introduction with more + details<sgmltag class="endtag">link</sgmltag> section.<sgmltag class="endtag">para</sgmltag></programlisting> <para>This output will be generated (<emphasis>emphasized</emphasis> text is used to show the
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