Date: Tue, 26 Aug 2003 10:54:57 +0400 From: Denis Peplin <info@volginfo.ru> To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org Subject: docs/55987: [PATCH] correct a few <para> in handbook Message-ID: <200308261054.57546.info@volginfo.ru> Resent-Message-ID: <200308260700.h7Q70ZxN011692@freefall.freebsd.org>
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>Number: 55987
>Category: docs
>Synopsis: [PATCH] correct a few <para> in handbook
>Confidential: no
>Severity: non-critical
>Priority: medium
>Responsible: freebsd-doc
>State: open
>Quarter:
>Keywords:
>Date-Required:
>Class: doc-bug
>Submitter-Id: current-users
>Arrival-Date: Tue Aug 26 00:00:35 PDT 2003
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator: User &
>Release: FreeBSD 5.1-RELEASE-p2 i386
>Organization:
<organization of PR author (multiple lines)>
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD exp.local 5.1-RELEASE-p2 FreeBSD 5.1-RELEASE-p2 #0: Mon Aug 11 15:07:04 MSD 2003 root@exp.local:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/EXP i386
<machine, os, target, libraries (multiple lines)>
>Description:
see fix below
>How-To-Repeat:
<code/input/activities to reproduce the problem (multiple lines)>
>Fix:
Index: advanced-networking/chapter.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.234
diff -u -r1.234 chapter.sgml
--- advanced-networking/chapter.sgml 21 Jul 2003 13:35:50 -0000 1.234
+++ advanced-networking/chapter.sgml 25 Aug 2003 22:47:43 -0000
@@ -715,7 +715,7 @@
point or another client directly. </para>
<para>Typically, wireless clients only have one network device,
- the wireless networking card.<para>
+ the wireless networking card.</para>
<para>There are a few different ways to configure a wireless
client. These are based on the different wireless modes,
@@ -888,7 +888,7 @@
a <devicename>wi0</devicename> interface. If you had a Cisco
wireless device, it would come up as
<devicename>an0</devicename>, and therefore you would use
- &man.ancontrol.8;.<para>
+ &man.ancontrol.8;.</para>
</sect4>
@@ -1107,7 +1107,7 @@
that there is no support for spanning tree link management.</para>
<para>A bridge can add latency to your ping times, especially for
- traffic from one segment to another.
+ traffic from one segment to another.</para>
</sect2>
</sect1>
@@ -2060,7 +2060,7 @@
<filename>/usr/share/examples/diskless/clone_root</filename>
shell script. This script needs customization, at least to adjust
the place where the filesystem will be created (the
- <literal>DEST</literal> variable).
+ <literal>DEST</literal> variable).</para>
<para>Refer to the comments at the top of the script for
instructions. They explain how the base filesystem is built,
@@ -6578,7 +6578,7 @@
<sect2>
<title>Background on IPv6 Addresses</title>
<para>There are different types of IPv6 addresses: Unicast, Anycast and
- Multicast.<para>
+ Multicast.</para>
<para>Unicast addresses are the well known addresses. A packet sent
to a unicast address arrives exactly at the interface belonging to
Index: config/chapter.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.117
diff -u -r1.117 chapter.sgml
--- config/chapter.sgml 31 Jul 2003 11:26:43 -0000 1.117
+++ config/chapter.sgml 25 Aug 2003 22:42:19 -0000
@@ -137,7 +137,7 @@
of the files required to support the system, the &man.ports.7;
collection (recommended) and the source code (optional). Both
of which are optional at install time.
- At least 2 gigabytes would be recommended for this partition.
+ At least 2 gigabytes would be recommended for this partition.</para>
<para>When selecting partition sizes, keep the space
requirements in mind. Running out of space in
@@ -548,6 +548,7 @@
option is available. This will invoke the selected editor
with an empty file. When the file is saved, it will be
automatically installed by the <command>crontab</command> command.
+ </para>
</sect2>
</sect1>
Index: desktop/chapter.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/desktop/chapter.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.26
diff -u -r1.26 chapter.sgml
--- desktop/chapter.sgml 31 Jul 2003 05:54:50 -0000 1.26
+++ desktop/chapter.sgml 25 Aug 2003 22:40:17 -0000
@@ -265,7 +265,7 @@
not worked for me.</para>
<para>Install the <filename role="package">www/mozilla</filename> port,
- if <application>Mozilla</application> is not already installed.
+ if <application>Mozilla</application> is not already installed.</para>
<para>Now copy the <application>flash</application> plug-in files with:</para>
Index: linuxemu/chapter.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/linuxemu/chapter.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.89
diff -u -r1.89 chapter.sgml
--- linuxemu/chapter.sgml 13 Jul 2003 19:45:58 -0000 1.89
+++ linuxemu/chapter.sgml 25 Aug 2003 21:03:54 -0000
@@ -1474,7 +1474,7 @@
<para>It might also be a good idea to add <filename>linprocfs</filename>
to <filename>/etc/fstab</filename>. See <command>man linprocfs</command>.
Another parameter to set is <emphasis>kern.fallback_elf_brand=3</emphasis>
- which is done in file <filename>/etc/sysctl.conf</filename>.
+ which is done in file <filename>/etc/sysctl.conf</filename>.</para>
</sect3>
</sect2>
Index: mirrors/chapter.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mirrors/chapter.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.312
diff -u -r1.312 chapter.sgml
--- mirrors/chapter.sgml 20 Jul 2003 19:51:02 -0000 1.312
+++ mirrors/chapter.sgml 25 Aug 2003 21:02:56 -0000
@@ -4698,7 +4698,7 @@
<term>United States of America</term>
<listitem>
- <para>rsync://ftp-master.FreeBSD.org/<para>
+ <para>rsync://ftp-master.FreeBSD.org/</para>
<para>This server may only be used by FreeBSD primary mirror
sites.</para>
Index: multimedia/chapter.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/multimedia/chapter.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.52
diff -u -r1.52 chapter.sgml
--- multimedia/chapter.sgml 13 Jul 2003 20:36:52 -0000 1.52
+++ multimedia/chapter.sgml 25 Aug 2003 21:01:45 -0000
@@ -1175,7 +1175,7 @@
<para>To play from file, such as
<filename>testfile.avi</filename> through one of the various
- video interfaces set the <option>-vo</option>:
+ video interfaces set the <option>-vo</option>:</para>
<screen>&prompt.user; <userinput>mplayer -vo xv testfile.avi</userinput></screen>
<screen>&prompt.user; <userinput>mplayer -vo sdl testfile.avi</userinput></screen>
Index: security/chapter.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.164
diff -u -r1.164 chapter.sgml
--- security/chapter.sgml 30 Jul 2003 13:49:47 -0000 1.164
+++ security/chapter.sgml 25 Aug 2003 21:00:44 -0000
@@ -3178,7 +3178,7 @@
<para>Once this packet arrives at <hostid
role="ipaddr">W.X.Y.Z</hostid> it will need to
<quote>unencapsulated</quote>, and delivered to <hostid
- role="ipaddr">192.168.2.1</hostid>.
+ role="ipaddr">192.168.2.1</hostid>.</para>
</orderedlist>
<para>You can think of this as requiring a <quote>tunnel</quote>
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