Date: Thu, 2 Dec 2004 18:03:12 GMT From: Gavin Atkinson <gavin.atkinson@ury.york.ac.uk> To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org Subject: docs/74624: Grammar changes to freebsd-users slide Message-ID: <200412021803.iB2I3CeY097778@buffy.york.ac.uk> Resent-Message-ID: <200412021810.iB2IAGBO002203@freefall.freebsd.org>
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>Number: 74624 >Category: docs >Synopsis: Grammar changes to freebsd-users slide >Confidential: no >Severity: non-critical >Priority: low >Responsible: freebsd-doc >State: open >Quarter: >Keywords: >Date-Required: >Class: doc-bug >Submitter-Id: current-users >Arrival-Date: Thu Dec 02 18:10:16 GMT 2004 >Closed-Date: >Last-Modified: >Originator: Gavin Atkinson >Release: FreeBSD 5.3-RC2 i386 >Organization: >Environment: System: FreeBSD buffy.york.ac.uk 5.3-RC2 FreeBSD 5.3-RC2 #5: Mon Nov 1 20:13:24 GMT 2004 root@buffy.york.ac.uk:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/BUFFY i386 >Description: Update a couple of points on the freebsd-users slide for better grammar. >How-To-Repeat: N/A >Fix: Patch attached. (also at http://www.devrandom.co.uk/freebsd/slides-users.diff ) --- slides-users.diff begins here --- Index: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/slides/common/freebsd-users.xml =================================================================== RCS file: /usr/cvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/slides/common/freebsd-users.xml,v retrieving revision 1.3 diff -u -r1.3 freebsd-users.xml --- doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/slides/common/freebsd-users.xml 8 Sep 2004 09:37:18 -0000 1.3 +++ doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/slides/common/freebsd-users.xml 2 Dec 2004 17:52:30 -0000 @@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ <listitem>In the last year alone, about one million new FreeBSD hosts were counted by Netcraft, an incredible growth rate - despite more media attention for Linux.</listitem> + despite more media attention towards Linux.</listitem> </itemizedlist> </foil> @@ -71,7 +71,7 @@ <itemizedlist> - <listitem>BSD has existed since the last 1970's and was the testbed + <listitem>BSD has existed since the late 1970's and was the testbed and reference implementation for TCP/IP.</listitem> <listitem>The Internet Software Consortium (ISC) uses FreeBSD @@ -108,4 +108,4 @@ </itemizedlist> </foil> -</foilgroup> \ No newline at end of file +</foilgroup> --- slides-users.diff ends here --- >Release-Note: >Audit-Trail: >Unformatted:
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