Date: Sun, 4 May 2003 02:58:52 -0700 (PDT) From: Murray Stokely <murray@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@FreeBSD.org, cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org Subject: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks chapter.sgml Message-ID: <200305040958.h449wqNq039389@repoman.freebsd.org>
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murray 2003/05/04 02:58:52 PDT
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Modified files:
en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks chapter.sgml
Log:
More work on the new GBDE section:
* Remove a comment encouraging someone to convert an xref to a ulink.
* Simplify run-on sentence in introduction.
* Use more descriptive DocBook tags.
* Refer to our two versions of UFS as UFS1 and UFS2 rather than UFS
and UFS2. (1)
* Move an ephemeral URL from the main text to a footnote.
* Note that newfs -O2 is the default for FreeBSD 5.1 and later (1).
* Wordsmith (1, partially)
PR: docs/51598
(1) Submitted by: bmah
Revision Changes Path
1.152 +27 -29 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks/chapter.sgml
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