Date: Thu, 28 Aug 2025 17:09:45 GMT From: Benedict Reuschling <bcr@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@FreeBSD.org, dev-commits-doc-all@FreeBSD.org Subject: git: b65c5744af - main - Avoid the use of "you" in the network-servers chapter Message-ID: <202508281709.57SH9jr5003422@gitrepo.freebsd.org>
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The branch main has been updated by bcr: URL: https://cgit.FreeBSD.org/doc/commit/?id=b65c5744af0dc93c547c59bf7ec56ba6b198ec77 commit b65c5744af0dc93c547c59bf7ec56ba6b198ec77 Author: Benedict Reuschling <bcr@FreeBSD.org> AuthorDate: 2025-08-28 15:28:39 +0000 Commit: Benedict Reuschling <bcr@FreeBSD.org> CommitDate: 2025-08-28 17:09:14 +0000 Avoid the use of "you" in the network-servers chapter Rewrite sentences that contain 'you', which should be avoided according to the FDP Primer. The resulting sentences are easier to understand and often shorter. I did not change programlistings and other output as these are from programs, which need to be changed first (out of scope of this change). Event: Oslo Hackathon 2025 Approved by: carlavilla Differential Revision: https://reviews.freebsd.org/D52213 --- .../content/en/books/handbook/network-servers/_index.adoc | 10 +++++----- 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-) diff --git a/documentation/content/en/books/handbook/network-servers/_index.adoc b/documentation/content/en/books/handbook/network-servers/_index.adoc index 37109cb947..d7ac579d4f 100644 --- a/documentation/content/en/books/handbook/network-servers/_index.adoc +++ b/documentation/content/en/books/handbook/network-servers/_index.adoc @@ -96,14 +96,14 @@ Each line of this configuration file represents an application which can be star By default, every line starts with a comment (`+#+`), meaning that inetd is not listening for any applications. To configure inetd to listen for an application's connections, remove the `+#+` at the beginning of the line for that application. -After saving your edits, configure inetd to start at system boot by editing [.filename]#/etc/rc.conf#: +After saving the edits, configure inetd to start at system boot by editing [.filename]#/etc/rc.conf#: [.programlisting] .... inetd_enable="YES" .... -To start inetd now, so that it listens for the service you configured, type: +To start inetd now, so that it listens for the configured service, type: [source,shell] .... @@ -1249,7 +1249,7 @@ default:\ In this example, the system is using the DES format for password hashing. Other possible values include `blf` for Blowfish, `md5` for MD5, `sha256` and `sha512` for SHA-256 and SHA-512 respectively. -For more information and the up to date list of what is available on your system, consult the man:crypt[3] manpage. +For more information and the up to date list of what is available on the system, consult the man:crypt[3] manpage. If the format on a host needs to be edited to match the one being used in the NIS domain, the login capability database must be rebuilt after saving the change: @@ -2618,7 +2618,7 @@ On FreeBSD, the built-in ntpd can be used to synchronize a system's clock. ntpd is configured using man:rc.conf[5] variables and [.filename]#/etc/ntp.conf#, as detailed in the following sections. ntpd communicates with its network peers using UDP packets. -Any firewalls between your machine and its NTP peers must be configured to allow UDP packets in and out on port 123. +Any firewalls between the machine and its NTP peers must be configured to allow UDP packets in and out on port 123. ==== The [.filename]#/etc/ntp.conf# file @@ -2732,7 +2732,7 @@ The presence of any of the following keywords in [.filename]#ntp.conf# requires * logdir * statsdir -To manually configure ntpd to run as user `ntpd` you must: +To manually configure ntpd to run as user `ntpd`: * Ensure that the `ntpd` user has access to all the files and directories specified in the configuration. * Arrange for the `mac_ntpd` module to be loaded or compiled into the kernel. See man:mac_ntpd[4] for details.
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