Date: Wed, 3 Dec 2014 20:32:03 +0000 (UTC) From: Benedict Reuschling <bcr@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, svn-doc-head@freebsd.org Subject: svn commit: r46061 - in head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook: advanced-networking bsdinstall geom security Message-ID: <201412032032.sB3KW3tw094223@svn.freebsd.org>
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Author: bcr Date: Wed Dec 3 20:32:03 2014 New Revision: 46061 URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/46061 Log: Change some sentences where it makes sense to remove the redundant filename and word. Translators can ignore this. Obtained from: igor -E output Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.xml head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/geom/chapter.xml head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.xml Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.xml Wed Dec 3 20:04:29 2014 (r46060) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.xml Wed Dec 3 20:32:03 2014 (r46061) @@ -2194,7 +2194,7 @@ freebsdap 00:11:95:c3:0d:ac 1 <para>Debugging support is provided by &man.wpa.supplicant.8;. Try running this utility manually - with the <option>-dd</option> option and look at the + with <option>-dd</option> and look at the system logs.</para> </listitem> @@ -4294,8 +4294,8 @@ cd /usr/src/etc; make distribution</prog <step> <para>On the <acronym>TFTP</acronym> server, read - <filename>/var/log/xferlog</filename> to ensure that the - <filename>pxeboot</filename> file is being retrieved from + <filename>/var/log/xferlog</filename> to ensure that + <filename>pxeboot</filename> is being retrieved from the correct location. To test this example configuration:</para> Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml Wed Dec 3 20:04:29 2014 (r46060) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall/chapter.xml Wed Dec 3 20:32:03 2014 (r46061) @@ -1451,10 +1451,10 @@ Ethernet address 0:3:ba:b:92:d4, Host ID <para>Multiple file system partitions can be created and some people prefer a traditional layout with separate partitions - for the <filename>/</filename>, <filename>/var</filename>, - <filename>/tmp</filename>, and <filename>/usr</filename> file - systems. See <xref linkend="bsdinstall-part-manual-splitfs"/> - for an example.</para> + for <filename>/</filename>, <filename>/var</filename>, + <filename>/tmp</filename>, and <filename>/usr</filename>. See + <xref linkend="bsdinstall-part-manual-splitfs"/> for an + example.</para> <para>The <literal>Size</literal> may be entered with common abbreviations: <emphasis>K</emphasis> for kilobytes, Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/geom/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/geom/chapter.xml Wed Dec 3 20:04:29 2014 (r46060) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/geom/chapter.xml Wed Dec 3 20:32:03 2014 (r46061) @@ -370,7 +370,7 @@ Done.</screen> uses a traditional file system layout, with partitions for <filename>/</filename>, swap, <filename>/var</filename>, <filename>/tmp</filename>, and <filename>/usr</filename>. A - single <filename>/</filename> file system and a swap partition + single <filename>/</filename> and a swap partition will also work.</para> <para>Partitions on the mirror do not have to be the same size Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.xml ============================================================================== --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.xml Wed Dec 3 20:04:29 2014 (r46060) +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.xml Wed Dec 3 20:32:03 2014 (r46061) @@ -427,8 +427,8 @@ Enter new password:</screen> <para>After installation of this package or port, the system may be checked using the following command. It will produce a lot - of information and will require some manual pressing of the - <keycap>ENTER</keycap> key:</para> + of information and will require some manual pressing of + <keycap>ENTER</keycap>:</para> <screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>rkhunter -c</userinput></screen>
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