Date: Fri, 23 Jul 2004 10:30:48 +0000 (UTC) From: Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@FreeBSD.org, cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org Subject: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/5-roadmap article.sgml Message-ID: <200407231030.i6NAUn8r038924@repoman.freebsd.org>
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keramida 2004-07-23 10:30:48 UTC
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Modified files:
en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/5-roadmap article.sgml
Log:
Rewrite one of the epilogue paragraphs to avoid excessive use of
"As..." as the start of a sentence.
Revision Changes Path
1.22 +7 -7 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/5-roadmap/article.sgml
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