Date: Mon, 17 Sep 2007 21:02:43 +0000 (UTC) From: Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@FreeBSD.org, cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org Subject: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/5-roadmap article.sgml Message-ID: <200709172102.l8HL2hEx089576@repoman.freebsd.org>
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keramida 2007-09-17 21:02:43 UTC
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Modified files:
en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/5-roadmap article.sgml
Log:
Avoid using "It was", but use a more explicit reference to the
version-guide article in the abstract of 5-roadmap. This way
the text is a bit less confusing.
Revision Changes Path
1.28 +2 -2 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/5-roadmap/article.sgml
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