Date: Fri, 6 Jul 2001 13:20:40 +0300 (EEST) From: Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@ceid.upatras.gr> To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@freebsd.org Subject: docs/28766: various whitespace, typos and tag fixes for articles/diskless-x/article.sgml Message-ID: <200107061020.f66AKe929574@hades.hell.gr>
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>Number: 28766 >Category: docs >Synopsis: various whitespace, typos and tag fixes for articles/diskless-x/article.sgml >Confidential: no >Severity: non-critical >Priority: low >Responsible: freebsd-doc >State: open >Quarter: >Keywords: >Date-Required: >Class: doc-bug >Submitter-Id: current-users >Arrival-Date: Fri Jul 06 03:30:02 PDT 2001 >Closed-Date: >Last-Modified: >Originator: Giorgos Keramidas >Release: FreeBSD 5.0-CURRENT i386 >Organization: >Environment: System: FreeBSD hades.hell.gr 5.0-CURRENT FreeBSD 5.0-CURRENT #0: Sun Jun 24 18:34:43 EEST 2001 root@hades.hell.gr:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/CHARON i386 >Description: The attached patch fixes various little details of the diskless-x article. It changes a few whitespace and typo errors that I found, and adds some markup to places where it seemed proper. I didn't want to file seperate PR's for whitespace fixes, another for typos, and yet another for added markup. I also did not reindent the text, since it makes the patch look awful. I guess these have to be committed separately, and then indentation be reapplied to the article source though :/ >How-To-Repeat: >Fix: Index: en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/diskless-x/article.sgml =================================================================== RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/diskless-x/article.sgml,v retrieving revision 1.4 diff -u -r1.4 article.sgml --- en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/diskless-x/article.sgml 2001/04/17 15:53:37 1.4 +++ en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/diskless-x/article.sgml 2001/07/06 10:14:55 @@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ <authorgroup> <author> - <firstname> Jerry</firstname> + <firstname>Jerry</firstname> <surname>Kendall</surname> <affiliation> <address> @@ -125,7 +125,7 @@ <title>Booting across the network</title> <para>Boot the diskless system with out any config.sys/autoexec.bat - files. try running the boot program for your Ethernet adapter.</para> + files. Try running the boot program for your Ethernet adapter.</para> <para>My Ethernet adapter is running in WD8013 16bit mode so I run <filename>nb8390.com</filename></para> @@ -169,7 +169,7 @@ <para>If you have to change the <filename>/etc/inetd.conf</filename> file, send a <literal>HUP</literal> signal to inetd. To do this, get the process ID of inetd with <command>ps -ax | grep inetd | grep -v - grep</command>. Once you have it, send it a HUP signal. Do this by + grep</command>. Once you have it, send it a <literal>HUP</literal> signal. Do this by <command>kill -HUP <pid></command>. This will force inetd to re-read its config file.</para> @@ -249,11 +249,11 @@ are my own.</para> </note> - <para>Create the directory '/tftpboot' on the server it will contain the + <para>Create the directory <filename>/tftpboot</filename> on the server it will contain the configuration files for the diskless systems that the server will serve. - These files will be named 'cfg.<ip>' where <ip> is the IP - address of the diskless system. The config file for 'altair' is - /tftpboot/cfg.199.246.76.2. The contents is:</para> + These files will be named <filename>cfg.<replaceable>ip</replaceable></filename> where <replaceable>ip<replaceable> is the IP + address of the diskless system. The config file for <hostid>altair</hostid> is + <filename>/tftpboot/cfg.199.246.76.2</filename>. The contents is:</para> <programlisting>rootfs 199.246.76.1:/DiskLess/rootfs/altair hostname altair.kcis.com</programlisting> @@ -275,7 +275,7 @@ <para>I use my spare 386DX-40 as a dedicated X terminal.</para> - <para>The hierarchy for 'altair' is:</para> + <para>The hierarchy for <hostid>altair</hostid> is:</para> <literallayout>/ /bin >Release-Note: >Audit-Trail: >Unformatted: To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe freebsd-doc" in the body of the message
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