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Date:      Fri, 6 Jul 2001 13:20:40 +0300 (EEST)
From:      Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@ceid.upatras.gr>
To:        FreeBSD-gnats-submit@freebsd.org
Subject:   docs/28766: various whitespace, typos and tag fixes for articles/diskless-x/article.sgml
Message-ID:  <200107061020.f66AKe929574@hades.hell.gr>
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>Number:         28766
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       various whitespace, typos and tag fixes for articles/diskless-x/article.sgml
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          open
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Fri Jul 06 03:30:02 PDT 2001
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator:     Giorgos Keramidas
>Release:        FreeBSD 5.0-CURRENT i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD hades.hell.gr 5.0-CURRENT FreeBSD 5.0-CURRENT #0: Sun Jun 24 18:34:43 EEST 2001 root@hades.hell.gr:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/CHARON i386

>Description:

	The attached patch fixes various little details of the
	diskless-x article.  It changes a few whitespace and typo
	errors that I found, and adds some markup to places where it
	seemed proper.  I didn't want to file seperate PR's for
	whitespace fixes, another for typos, and yet another for added
	markup.  I also did not reindent the text, since it makes the
	patch look awful.  I guess these have to be committed
	separately, and then indentation be reapplied to the article
	source though :/

>How-To-Repeat:

>Fix:

Index: en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/diskless-x/article.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/diskless-x/article.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.4
diff -u -r1.4 article.sgml
--- en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/diskless-x/article.sgml	2001/04/17 15:53:37	1.4
+++ en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/diskless-x/article.sgml	2001/07/06 10:14:55
@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@
     
     <authorgroup>
       <author>
-	<firstname> Jerry</firstname>
+	<firstname>Jerry</firstname>
 	<surname>Kendall</surname>
 	<affiliation>
 	  <address>
@@ -125,7 +125,7 @@
     <title>Booting across the network</title>
     
     <para>Boot the diskless system with out any config.sys/autoexec.bat
-      files.  try running the boot program for your Ethernet adapter.</para>
+      files.  Try running the boot program for your Ethernet adapter.</para>
 
     <para>My Ethernet adapter is running in WD8013 16bit mode so I run
       <filename>nb8390.com</filename></para>
@@ -169,7 +169,7 @@
     <para>If you have to change the <filename>/etc/inetd.conf</filename> file,
       send a <literal>HUP</literal> signal to inetd.  To do this, get the
       process ID of inetd with <command>ps -ax | grep inetd | grep -v
-	grep</command>.  Once you have it, send it a HUP signal.  Do this by
+	grep</command>.  Once you have it, send it a <literal>HUP</literal> signal.  Do this by
       <command>kill -HUP &lt;pid&gt;</command>.  This will force inetd to
       re-read its config file.</para>
 
@@ -249,11 +249,11 @@
 	are my own.</para>
     </note>
 
-    <para>Create the directory '/tftpboot' on the server it will contain the
+    <para>Create the directory <filename>/tftpboot</filename> on the server it will contain the
       configuration files for the diskless systems that the server will serve.
-      These files will be named 'cfg.&lt;ip&gt;' where &lt;ip&gt; is the IP
-      address of the diskless system.  The config file for 'altair' is
-      /tftpboot/cfg.199.246.76.2.  The contents is:</para>
+      These files will be named <filename>cfg.<replaceable>ip</replaceable></filename> where <replaceable>ip<replaceable> is the IP
+      address of the diskless system.  The config file for <hostid>altair</hostid> is
+      <filename>/tftpboot/cfg.199.246.76.2</filename>.  The contents is:</para>
 
     <programlisting>rootfs 199.246.76.1:/DiskLess/rootfs/altair
 hostname altair.kcis.com</programlisting>
@@ -275,7 +275,7 @@
     
     <para>I use my spare 386DX-40 as a dedicated X terminal.</para>
 
-    <para>The hierarchy for 'altair' is:</para>
+    <para>The hierarchy for <hostid>altair</hostid> is:</para>
 
     <literallayout>/
 /bin
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