Date: Wed, 17 May 2000 23:53:57 -0700 (PDT) From: William Richard <wdr@tdl.com> To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Subject: Re: docs/18632: Minor grammar nit: internet.html (fwd) Message-ID: <Pine.BSF.4.21.0005172353350.1346-100000@wdr.my.domain>
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> The FreeBSD development team is as concerned about security as they are > about performance. > > Change "as they are" to "as it is". Might I suggest: "The FreeBSD developers are as concerned about security as they are about performance." Here we have individual developers rather than an impersonal "development team". Just a suggestion. WR -- William Richard BSD Unix Consultant Tel/Fax: 925-480-2319 x1951 E-Mail: wdr@tdl.com To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe freebsd-doc" in the body of the message
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