Date: Sun, 28 May 2006 18:33:25 +0000 (UTC) From: Remko Lodder <remko@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@FreeBSD.org, cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org Subject: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks chapter.sgml Message-ID: <200605281833.k4SIXQ0S080387@repoman.freebsd.org>
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remko 2006-05-28 18:33:25 UTC
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Modified files:
en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks chapter.sgml
Log:
Update the DVD-RAM section a bit. This avoids the usage of "you", "we"
and things like that, which is consistent with the rest of the documention.
Also remove a paragraph that mentioned that the upcoming commands should be
executed as root, since the prompt should imply that already (like the rest
of the handbook has as well).
Revision Changes Path
1.259 +9 -12 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/disks/chapter.sgml
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