Date: Mon, 16 Apr 2001 18:37:49 -0700 (PDT) From: Dima Dorfman <dd@FreeBSD.org> To: cvs-committers@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org Subject: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking chapter.sgml doc/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/basics chapter.sgml doc/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/kernelconfig chapter.sgml doc/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/kerneldebug chapter.sgml doc/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/mirrors chapter.sgml doc/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/ports chapter.sgml ... Message-ID: <200104170137.f3H1boC53018@freefall.freebsd.org>
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dd 2001/04/16 18:37:49 PDT
Modified files:
en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking
chapter.sgml
en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/basics chapter.sgml
en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/kernelconfig chapter.sgml
en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/kerneldebug chapter.sgml
en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/mirrors chapter.sgml
en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/ports chapter.sgml
en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/ppp-and-slip chapter.sgml
en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/printing chapter.sgml
en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/security chapter.sgml
en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/serialcomms chapter.sgml
Log:
Remove references to first-person pronouns ("I", "me", etc.): all they
do is serve to confuse the reader (who is this "I"?). Stuff inside
<question> tags in the mini-faq's and clearly-attributed blocks was
left alone.
Revision Changes Path
1.38 +48 -39 doc/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/advanced-networking/chapter.sgml
1.24 +8 -8 doc/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/basics/chapter.sgml
1.40 +2 -2 doc/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/kernelconfig/chapter.sgml
1.31 +3 -4 doc/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/kerneldebug/chapter.sgml
1.114 +4 -9 doc/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/mirrors/chapter.sgml
1.115 +2 -2 doc/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.sgml
1.34 +8 -8 doc/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/ppp-and-slip/chapter.sgml
1.32 +3 -3 doc/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/printing/chapter.sgml
1.42 +16 -15 doc/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.sgml
1.24 +5 -5 doc/en_US.ISO_8859-1/books/handbook/serialcomms/chapter.sgml
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