Date: Tue, 19 Feb 2002 13:00:02 -0800 (PST) From: Tom Rhodes <darklogik@pittgoth.com> To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Subject: Re: docs/32578: [PATCH] for doc review Message-ID: <200202192100.g1JL02q96051@freefall.freebsd.org>
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From: Tom Rhodes <darklogik@pittgoth.com>
To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
Cc:
Subject: Re: docs/32578: [PATCH] for doc review
Date: Tue, 19 Feb 2002 15:54:42 -0500 (EST)
diff -ru en.old/index.xsl en/index.xsl
--- en.old/index.xsl Tue Feb 19 15:28:13 2002
+++ en/index.xsl Tue Feb 19 15:52:40 2002
@@ -224,7 +224,7 @@
<p>FreeBSD is an advanced operating system for
Intel ia32 compatible, DEC Alpha, and PC-98 architectures.
- It is derived from BSD UNIX, the version of UNIX developed at
+ It is derived from BSD UNIX, the version of UNIX developed at
the University of California, Berkeley.
It is developed and maintained by
<a
@@ -233,33 +233,36 @@
<a href="{$base}/platforms/index.html">platforms</a> are in
various stages of development.</p>
- <h2><font color="#990000">Cutting edge features</font></h2>
+ <h2><font color="#990000">FreeBSD has cutting edge features</font></h2>
<p>FreeBSD offers advanced networking, performance, security
and compatibility
<a href="{$base}/features.html">features</a>
today which are still missing in other operating systems,
even some of the best commercial ones.</p>
-
- <h2><font color="#990000">Powerful Internet solutions</font></h2>
+
+ <h2><font color="#990000">Industrial strength Networking</font></h2>
<p>FreeBSD makes an ideal
<a href="{$base}/internet.html">Internet or Intranet</a>
server. It provides robust network services under the heaviest
loads and uses memory efficiently to maintain good response
- times for thousands of simultaneous user processes. Visit our
+ time for thousands of simultaneous user processes. Visit our
<a href="gallery/gallery.html">gallery</a> for examples of
- FreeBSD powered applications and services.</p>
-
- <h2><font color="#990000">Run a huge variety of
- applications</font></h2>
+ FreeBSD powered applications, servers, networks, and other services.</p>
+
+ <h2><font color="#990000">FreeBSD has access to hundreds of applications
+ </font></h2>
<p>The quality of FreeBSD combined with today's low-cost,
high-speed PC hardware makes FreeBSD a very economical
alternative to commercial UNIX workstations. It is well-suited
- for a great number of both desktop and server
- <a href="{$base}/applications.html">applications</a>.</p>
-
+ for a great number of both desktop and server
+ <a href="{$base}/applications.html">applications.</a>
+ Imagine an entire developement environment
+ right at your finger tips, with support for almost all of the major
+ programming languages!.</p>
+
<h2><font color="#990000">Easy to install</font></h2>
<p>FreeBSD can be installed from a variety of media including
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