Date: Wed, 15 May 2002 23:29:08 -0400 From: Chris Pepper <pepper@reppep.com> To: FreeBSD-doc@FreeBSD.ORG Subject: [PATCH] <http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/committers-guide/cvs. operations.html> Message-ID: <p05111901b908d6f0c7e5@[64.81.19.109]>
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Tweaked e.g. (italicized, and comma added), and added a
missing word later. Submitted for your enjoyment....
--- cvs.operations.html Wed May 15 20:29:50 2002
+++ cvs.operations.html.fixed Wed May 15 23:20:42 2002
@@ -309,7 +309,7 @@
<p>Arguments to <tt class="OPTION">-D</tt> and <tt class=
"OPTION">-r</tt> are sticky, which means cvs will
- remember them later, e.g. when you do a <tt class=
+ remember them later, <em>e.g.,</em> when you do a <tt class=
"COMMAND">cvs update</tt>.</p>
</li>
@@ -392,9 +392,9 @@
<p>This updates the <tt class="FILENAME">shazam</tt> file
or the contents of the <tt class="FILENAME">shazam</tt>
directory to the latest version along the branch you
- checked out. If you checked out a ``point in time'', does
- nothing unless the tags have moved in the repository or
- some other weird stuff is going on.</p>
+ checked out. If you checked out a ``point in time'', this
+ does nothing, unless the tags have moved in the repository
+ or some other weird stuff is going on.</p>
<p>Useful options, in addition to those listed above for
<tt class="COMMAND">checkout</tt>:</p>
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