Date: Sat, 08 Oct 2011 21:25:16 -0400 From: Glen Barber <gjb@FreeBSD.org> To: Warren Block <wblock@FreeBSD.org> Cc: doc-committers@FreeBSD.org, cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml Message-ID: <4E90F7FC.6000708@FreeBSD.org> In-Reply-To: <201110090121.p991LrGl070116@repoman.freebsd.org> References: <201110090121.p991LrGl070116@repoman.freebsd.org>
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[-- Attachment #1 --] On 10/8/11 9:21 PM, Warren Block wrote: > wblock 2011-10-09 01:21:53 UTC > > FreeBSD doc repository > > Modified files: > en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/bsdinstall chapter.sgml > Log: > Various fixes: > "effective at improving performance" is correct in English. > "issues with the installation" is vague, reworded. > Expand/clarify BIOS boot menu information. > Spelling/grammar. > Simplify Introducing bsdinstall. > Expand/clarify mirror site description choice. > Attempt to remove unnecessary instances of "the" and "you". > "Booting" is used in this doc more than "restarting". > Add link to network information. > And it was approved by gjb :) -- Glen Barber | gjb@FreeBSD.org FreeBSD Documentation Project [-- Attachment #2 --] -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v1.4.11 (Darwin) iQEcBAEBCAAGBQJOkPgAAAoJEFJPDDeguUajmywH/jiOfnKLULTPZUfgq+8rEa9z C8SIzB5zG6U/zbAtvzJnfF7L8t+jDBoKwAUarjCFwUnMndFQg6B1XB2gefZ4/SpL T8uAJ5gvuiklTW3zJ2yCanz+oHL6y0WflGRAw/L0eFv4FmL6QX7jk2rk0xTN5tdA cZkE/1xHrzLYS2ljDuEfuFHqqdxZ6aXRQEgJbJUz1q8SXoDv+Jd280rAQVvtXBBk XxEATPFcL3s+iiDh7iLbZMYOpfstIuIUyAgv/To36bI42fxIUDffmF0Dz5YfykTo 3ESuqVgqYWGhDtPIO516d0OSkB3JG7u3mY6Q6dL64nw1P9Mp0uV8zKIrD0THMdM= =3ZE2 -----END PGP SIGNATURE-----
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