Date: Mon, 18 Feb 2013 16:51:43 -0500 From: Eitan Adler <eadler@freebsd.org> To: Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@mit.edu> Cc: svn-doc-head@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, doc-committers@freebsd.org Subject: Re: svn commit: r41010 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mirrors Message-ID: <CAF6rxgkdv3OoDEk6OyF=0x3PWCCyRAGYUn6=uBne-8r9Lxs-Hg@mail.gmail.com> In-Reply-To: <alpine.GSO.1.10.1302181557570.9389@multics.mit.edu> References: <201302181954.r1IJsLmd095109@svn.freebsd.org> <alpine.GSO.1.10.1302181557570.9389@multics.mit.edu>
next in thread | previous in thread | raw e-mail | index | archive | help
On 18 February 2013 16:01, Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@mit.edu> wrote:
> How is refusing bin and usr.bin relevant for people who only know English
> and German (the part of the text above the quoted portion)?
Ugh. In trying to preserve the useful portions of the documentation I
trimmed too little.
I'll re-read the document and see what else I could trim or re-write
>> - <para>With this very useful feature, those users who are on
>> + <para>With this very feature, those users who are on
>
> Do we care more that it is this particular feature or that it is a useful
> feature? ("With this very ..." does not seem particularly consistent with
> our style.)
Good point. I kept the wording that was there, but perhaps I should
have been more aggressive.
--
Eitan Adler
Source, Ports, Doc committer
Bugmeister, Ports Security teams
Want to link to this message? Use this URL: <https://mail-archive.FreeBSD.org/cgi/mid.cgi?CAF6rxgkdv3OoDEk6OyF=0x3PWCCyRAGYUn6=uBne-8r9Lxs-Hg>