Date: Tue, 4 Jun 2002 11:30:03 -0700 (PDT) From: Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@FreeBSD.org> To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: docs/38851: Some keycap tags addition and minor changes in section 3.8 of the Handbook Message-ID: <200206041830.g54IU3i72876@freefall.freebsd.org>
next in thread | raw e-mail | index | archive | help
The following reply was made to PR docs/38851; it has been noted by GNATS.
From: Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@FreeBSD.org>
To: Marc Fonvieille <marc@blackend.org>
Cc: bug-followup@FreeBSD.org
Subject: Re: docs/38851: Some keycap tags addition and minor changes in section 3.8 of the Handbook
Date: Tue, 4 Jun 2002 21:03:54 +0300
On 2002-06-03 12:50 +0200, Marc Fonvieille wrote:
> @@ -1256,9 +1256,9 @@
[Snippetry of patch part that looks nice.]
> @@ -1277,7 +1277,7 @@
> <secondary><command>emacs</command></secondary>
> </indexterm>
> <para>FreeBSD also comes with more powerful text editors such as
> - <command>vi</command> as part of the base system, and
> + <command>vi</command> as part of the base system,
> <command>emacs</command> and <command>vim</command>
> as part of the FreeBSD Ports Collection. These editors offer much
> more functionality and power at the expense of being a little more
> --- chapter.sgml.diff ends here ---
The new line that is added has whitespace at EOL. This is not really
important though. What is more important is that we'll probably have to
rewrite parts of the sentence anyways. What about something like this?
%%%
@@ -1277,9 +1277,9 @@
<secondary><command>emacs</command></secondary>
</indexterm>
<para>FreeBSD also comes with more powerful text editors such as
- <command>vi</command> as part of the base system, and
- <command>emacs</command> and <command>vim</command>
- as part of the FreeBSD Ports Collection. These editors offer much
+ <command>vi</command> as part of the base system, while other editors, like
+ <command>emacs</command> and <command>vim</command>,
+ are part of the FreeBSD Ports Collection. These editors offer much
more functionality and power at the expense of being a little more
complicated to learn. However if you plan on doing a lot of text
editing, learning a more powerful editor such as
%%%
- Giorgos
To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org
with "unsubscribe freebsd-doc" in the body of the message
Want to link to this message? Use this URL: <https://mail-archive.FreeBSD.org/cgi/mid.cgi?200206041830.g54IU3i72876>