Date: Mon, 7 Jul 2003 09:30:43 -0400 From: Tom Rhodes <trhodes@FreeBSD.org> To: jkoshy@FreeBSD.org (Joseph Koshy) Cc: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: [review request] New config.5 manual page Message-ID: <20030707093043.17383167.trhodes@FreeBSD.org> In-Reply-To: <20030704084540.104CA37B401@hub.freebsd.org> References: <20030704084540.104CA37B401@hub.freebsd.org>
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On Fri, 4 Jul 2003 01:45:40 -0700 (PDT)
jkoshy@freebsd.org (Joseph Koshy) wrote:
Hello Joseph,
Ruslan has already added more than enough comments. One thing he
did not get is this:
> .Bx 4.1 ,
> and was subsequently revised in
> .Bx 4.4 .
> The
> .Fx
> the kernel configuration mechanism changed further in
> .Fx 4.0
> and
> .Fx 5.0 ,
> moving towards an architecture supporting dynamic (boot time
^
> and runtime) kernel configuration.
'towards' is not a word. Just remove the 's'. Thanks!
--
Tom Rhodes
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