Date: Thu, 14 Mar 2002 10:55:48 +0200 From: Peter Pentchev <roam@ringlet.net> To: Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@freebsd.org> Cc: doc@freebsd.org Subject: Re: [PATCH] Entities for FreeBSD.org addresses & lists Message-ID: <20020314105548.A1336@straylight.oblivion.bg> In-Reply-To: <20020313084023.GA27931@hades.hell.gr>; from keramida@freebsd.org on Wed, Mar 13, 2002 at 10:40:23AM %2B0200 References: <20020313092728.A344@straylight.oblivion.bg> <20020313084023.GA27931@hades.hell.gr>
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[-- Attachment #1 --] On Wed, Mar 13, 2002 at 10:40:23AM +0200, Giorgos Keramidas wrote: > On 2002-03-13 09:27, Peter Pentchev wrote: > > At http://people.FreeBSD.org/~roam/doc/fbsdmail/ [snip] > In books::faq.patch change this: > > + the &a.platforms;. > + </para> > > to the following: > > + the &a.platforms;.</para> I was trying to avoid excessive whitespace changes, as per Michael Lucas's suggestions in earlier threads. In fact, I will do this as a two-step commit - one to replace long-winded descriptions with entities, and then another one to clean up whitespace. > In books::fdp-primer.patch change this: > > +<!ENTITY % mailing-lists PUBLIC "-//FreeBSD//ENTITIES DocBook Mailing List Entities//EN"> %mailing-lists; > > to read: > > +<!ENTITY % mailing-lists PUBLIC "-//FreeBSD//ENTITIES DocBook Mailing List Entities//EN"> > +%mailing-lists; Oops. Thanks :) > In books::fdp-primer.patch don't let the comma have any whitespace > before it: > > + let you have any) then you can e-mail &a.nik; > + , and arrange to e-mail the files > > should look like: > > + let you have any) then you can e-mail &a.nik;, > + and arrange to e-mail the files See above about whitespace.. > In the handbook diff, the following might look a little strange: > > please contact the FreeBSD project administrators > - <email>hubs@FreeBSD.org</email> for more information.</para> > + &a.hubs; for more information.</para> > > since &a.hubs; will make the output have the following text: > > the FreeBSD project administrators FreeBSD mirror sites mailing > list <hubs@FreeBSD.org> > > you might want to remove 'FreeBSD project administrators' too, to make the > output be: > > the FreeBSD mirror sites mailing list <hubs@FreeBSD.org> Ack.. must have missed this one in the proofreading. Thanks! > Don't make changes to 'The Corporate Networkers Guide'. It's copyrighted > work, and you (or the Doc team) would have to contact the author and > published first, get their approval, if that it at all possible. > > <not-fine> > books::corp-net-guide.patch > </not-fine> Yep, I have to admit that this thought crossed my mind, but I plain forgot to ask about it when writing the actual e-mail.. > Super cool work :))) Thanks :) And thanks for a super cool and useful review! G'luck, Peter -- Peter Pentchev roam@ringlet.net roam@FreeBSD.org PGP key: http://people.FreeBSD.org/~roam/roam.key.asc Key fingerprint FDBA FD79 C26F 3C51 C95E DF9E ED18 B68D 1619 4553 No language can express every thought unambiguously, least of all this one. [-- Attachment #2 --] -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v1.0.6 (FreeBSD) Comment: For info see http://www.gnupg.org iEYEARECAAYFAjyQZZQACgkQ7Ri2jRYZRVMgrACgkUsIgUiHvuAEtNNNUNZ45MC7 R4gAmwQhtmWU0ht8LoqRuZMoa+K93PXf =OyF0 -----END PGP SIGNATURE-----help
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