Date: Mon, 4 Jun 2001 10:49:50 +0100 From: Nik Clayton <nik@freebsd.org> To: Chris Costello <chris@calldei.com> Cc: doc@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: FAQ patch #1: Repairing all the stuff between <question> tags Message-ID: <20010604104949.A20450@catkin.nothing-going-on.org> In-Reply-To: <20010603220925.H80472@holly.calldei.com>; from chris@calldei.com on Sun, Jun 03, 2001 at 10:09:25PM -0500 References: <20010603220925.H80472@holly.calldei.com>
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--k1lZvvs/B4yU6o8G Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable On Sun, Jun 03, 2001 at 10:09:25PM -0500, Chris Costello wrote: > Please give me suggestions or reviews as to what needs to > change with my patch. >=20 > http://people.freebsd.org/~chris/faq-question.patch * In the IBM Thinkpad question, I wouldn't remove the "A, T, or X series" from the question text. * "How come I cannot install from tape?" -> "Why can I not install from tape?" That occurs in a couple of places (in some of "Why does" would be better replacement text. * "<literal>Missing Operating System</literal>" -> "<errorname>..." There are several areas where "<literal>" should become "<errorname>" I'll add "Produce a 'table of error messages'" to my list of things to do. * "<literal>F?</literal> prompt" -> "<prompt>F?</prompt> prompt" Apart from those nits, great. N --=20 FreeBSD: The Power to Serve http://www.freebsd.org/ FreeBSD Documentation Project http://www.freebsd.org/docproj/ --- 15B8 3FFC DDB4 34B0 AA5F 94B7 93A8 0764 2C37 E375 --- --k1lZvvs/B4yU6o8G Content-Type: application/pgp-signature Content-Disposition: inline -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v1.0.5 (FreeBSD) Comment: For info see http://www.gnupg.org iEYEARECAAYFAjsbWVwACgkQk6gHZCw343W+PgCeJkAlcvdtfFbnaaw1M5i8NJNA /2gAn0ErMySBddieVnGlCF6kxasbQWTY =SUNp -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- --k1lZvvs/B4yU6o8G-- To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe freebsd-doc" in the body of the message
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