Date: Sun, 5 May 2002 17:23:28 +0200 (CEST) From: Marc Fonvieille <marc@blackend.org> To: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org Subject: docs/37767: Punctuation problems in section 2.5.2 of the Handbook Message-ID: <200205051523.g45FNSQB091312@gothic.blackend.org>
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>Number: 37767 >Category: docs >Synopsis: Punctuation problems in section 2.5.2 of the Handbook >Confidential: no >Severity: non-critical >Priority: low >Responsible: freebsd-doc >State: open >Quarter: >Keywords: >Date-Required: >Class: doc-bug >Submitter-Id: current-users >Arrival-Date: Sun May 05 08:30:03 PDT 2002 >Closed-Date: >Last-Modified: >Originator: Marc Fonvieille >Release: FreeBSD 4.5-STABLE i386 >Organization: >Environment: System: FreeBSD gothic.blackend.org 4.5-STABLE FreeBSD 4.5-STABLE #0: Fri Apr 19 12:13:41 CEST 2002 marc@gothic.blackend.org:/usr/src/sys/compile/GOTHIC i386 >Description: In section 2.5.2 of the Handbook, instead of colons wrong ponctuation signs are used. Read the following patch and http://www.freebsd.org/handbook/install-steps.html for more details. >How-To-Repeat: >Fix: Apply the patch to handbook/install/chapter.sgml --- chapter.sgml.diff begins here --- --- chapter.sgml.org Sun May 5 16:27:49 2002 +++ chapter.sgml Sun May 5 16:29:02 2002 @@ -1530,7 +1530,7 @@ <para>Call <literal>A</literal> the root filesystem. If you used the <command>ls</command> command to view the contents of this directory you would see two subdirectories, <literal>A1</literal> and - <literal>A2</literal>. The directory tree looks like this.</para> + <literal>A2</literal>. The directory tree looks like this:</para> <literallayout class="monospaced"> / | @@ -1542,7 +1542,7 @@ filesystem. So now suppose that you mount filesystem <literal>B</literal> on to the directory <literal>A1</literal>. The root directory of <literal>B</literal> replaces <literal>A1</literal>, - and the directories in <literal>B</literal> appear accordingly.</para> + and the directories in <literal>B</literal> appear accordingly:</para> <literallayout class="monospaced"> / | @@ -1562,7 +1562,7 @@ <firstterm>unmounted</firstterm> from A.</para> <para>If <literal>B</literal> had been mounted on <literal>A2</literal> - then the diagram would look like this;</para> + then the diagram would look like this:</para> <literallayout class="monospaced"> / | @@ -1580,7 +1580,7 @@ <para>Filesystems can be mounted on top of one another. Continuing the last example, the <literal>C</literal> filesystem could be mounted on top of the <literal>B1</literal> directory in the <literal>B</literal> - filesystem, leading to this arrangement.</para> + filesystem, leading to this arrangement:</para> <literallayout class="monospaced"> / | @@ -1598,7 +1598,7 @@ <para>Or <literal>C</literal> could be mounted directly on to the <literal>A</literal> filesystem, under the <literal>A1</literal> - directory.</para> + directory:</para> <literallayout class="monospaced"> / | --- chapter.sgml.diff ends here --- >Release-Note: >Audit-Trail: >Unformatted: To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe freebsd-doc" in the body of the message
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