Date: Mon, 13 Jul 2009 17:18:45 -0500 From: Robert Noland <rnoland@FreeBSD.org> To: Joel Dahl <joel@FreeBSD.org> Cc: svn-src-head@freebsd.org, svn-src-all@freebsd.org, src-committers@freebsd.org, ariff@freebsd.org, Ben Kaduk <minimarmot@gmail.com> Subject: Re: svn commit: r195619 - head/share/man/man4 Message-ID: <1247523525.1745.14.camel@balrog.2hip.net> In-Reply-To: <4A5B8544.3040405@FreeBSD.org> References: <200907111525.n6BFPDrY056196@svn.freebsd.org> <47d0403c0907112040v785b6f4se7e927809035b3b5@mail.gmail.com> <4A5B8544.3040405@FreeBSD.org>
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[-- Attachment #1 --] On Mon, 2009-07-13 at 21:04 +0200, Joel Dahl wrote: > Ben Kaduk skrev: > > It would be nice to be consistent about using "and", "+" > > or neither for the parentheticals. > > Also, "LFE" does not appear to be expanded to "low frequency > > enhancement" anywhere .... > > I've fixed most of the issues you reported now, thanks. I didn't expand LFE > though, because I'm not sure where I should put the explanation. I'm no writer... but what I remember from our technical writers is to just expand the acronym on first use. Once people know what it stands for they can google it for an explanation if they need it.... robert. > Btw, if you have any more suggestions, just send them over. I think the > entire man page needs more love. > > -- > Joel -- Robert Noland <rnoland@FreeBSD.org> FreeBSD [-- Attachment #2 --] -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v2.0.11 (FreeBSD) iEYEABECAAYFAkpbssUACgkQM4TrQ4qfRONO9wCfa3dQZvT4burWEu8Q6lCbhw5q PkEAnR3Y1w9TEzFUsTH6yFb34VXGy57F =Y3GB -----END PGP SIGNATURE-----help
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