Date: Sun, 15 Jun 2003 03:12:00 -0700 (PDT) From: Murray Stokely <murray@FreeBSD.org> To: doc-committers@FreeBSD.org, cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org Subject: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config chapter.sgml Message-ID: <200306151012.h5FAC0EP048329@repoman.freebsd.org>
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murray 2003/06/15 03:12:00 PDT FreeBSD doc repository Modified files: en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config chapter.sgml Log: Use lower case indexterms, and correct an egregious entry : - <indexterm><primary>Configuring the <command>cron</command> utility</primary></indexterm> + <indexterm><primary>cron</primary> + <secondary>configuration</secondary></indexterm> This is wrong for many many reasons : * The indexterm is way too long and is a direct copy of the title of the section it resides in. The index is not a table of contents. * Two columns of index terms should fit at the back of the printed book, so four words is almos always out of the question. * indexterms relating to cron should appear near (as a subterm of) the 'cron' entry, not as a new 'Configuration blah' entry. Revision Changes Path 1.114 +11 -10 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.sgml
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