Date: Tue, 12 Feb 2013 00:31:17 -0500 (EST) From: Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@MIT.EDU> To: Dru Lavigne <dru@freebsd.org> Cc: svn-doc-head@freebsd.org, svn-doc-all@freebsd.org, doc-committers@freebsd.org Subject: Re: svn commit: r40947 - head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/filesystems Message-ID: <alpine.GSO.1.10.1302112227430.9389@multics.mit.edu> In-Reply-To: <201302111458.r1BEwYW7034821@svn.freebsd.org> References: <201302111458.r1BEwYW7034821@svn.freebsd.org>
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On Mon, 11 Feb 2013, Dru Lavigne wrote: > Modified: > head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/filesystems/chapter.xml > > Modified: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/filesystems/chapter.xml > ============================================================================== > --- head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/filesystems/chapter.xml Mon Feb 11 14:50:33 2013 (r40946) > +++ head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/filesystems/chapter.xml Mon Feb 11 14:58:34 2013 (r40947) > @@ -27,32 +27,30 @@ > + They allow users to upload and store files, provide access > + to data, and make hard drives useful. Different operating > + systems differ in their native file system. Traditionally, the > + native &os; file system has been the Unix File System > + <acronym>UFS</acronym> which has been recently modernized as > + <acronym>UFS2</acronym>. Since &os; 7.0, the Z File UFS2 is recent only in a very relative sense -- I used it (for non-root filesystems, I suppose) when I first picked up FreeBSD 5.2 in 2004. We can probably just say "which has been modernized as UFS2" at this point. > + System <acronym>ZFS</acronym> is also available as a native file > system.</para> > > @@ -529,37 +509,34 @@ errors: No known data errors</screen> > <sect3> > <title>Data Verification</title> > > - <para>As previously mentioned, <acronym>ZFS</acronym> uses > + <para><acronym>ZFS</acronym> uses > <literal>checksums</literal> to verify the integrity of Hmm, checksums probably doesn't need markup, here. > - stored data. They are enabled automatically upon creation > + stored data. These are enabled automatically upon creation > of file systems and may be disabled using the following > command:</para> > > @@ -571,43 +548,39 @@ config: > + <para>ZFS supports different types of quotas: the refquota, > + the general quota, the user quota, and the group quota. > + This section explains the basics of each type and includes > + some usage instructions.</para> Grammar is pretty lousy in this section, but you were just reformatting so I'll skip the details. Some things to look at for the next pass, I guess. -Ben
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