Date: Mon, 4 Jan 2010 21:11:27 +0000 (GMT) From: Gavin Atkinson <gavin@FreeBSD.org> To: Doug Barton <dougb@FreeBSD.org> Cc: doc-committers@FreeBSD.org, cvs-doc@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook book.sgml Message-ID: <alpine.BSF.2.00.1001042109440.41098@ury.york.ac.uk> In-Reply-To: <201001042038.o04KcFo8028508@repoman.freebsd.org> References: <201001042038.o04KcFo8028508@repoman.freebsd.org>
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On Mon, 4 Jan 2010, Doug Barton wrote: > dougb 2010-01-04 20:38:15 UTC > > Modified files: > en_US.ISO8859-1/books/porters-handbook book.sgml > Log: > Actually having the $FreeBSD$ tag expanded in the example rc.d script > did not end up looking as cool as I thought it would, so switch to an > unexpanded example. > > Fix the text in the new paragraph to work better around the markup. > <para> Unless there is a good reason to start the service > earlier all ports scripts should use >- <programlisting>REQUIRE: LOGIN</programlisting>. If the service >+ <programlisting>REQUIRE: LOGIN</programlisting> If the service > runs as a particular user (other than root) this is mandatory. This is now grammatically incorrect. I actually think the original is better than any rewording I can come up with. Gavin
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