Date: Sun, 27 Feb 2011 15:46:35 +0100 From: Benedict Reuschling <bcr@FreeBSD.org> To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: RFC: New Handbook section - HAST Message-ID: <4D6A63CB.7040908@FreeBSD.org> In-Reply-To: <20110227103645.GA53342@freefall.freebsd.org> References: <20110227103645.GA53342@freefall.freebsd.org>
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[-- Attachment #1 --] -----BEGIN PGP SIGNED MESSAGE----- Hash: SHA1 Am 27.02.11 11:36, schrieb Daniel Gerzo: > Hello guys, > > I have prepared a new Handbook section covering HAST. The tech stuff > has been reviewed by Pawel and Mikolaj Golub, so from the tech point of > view it should be all correct. Unfortunately, none of us is native > English speaker, therefore I would like to ask you guys to review the > language and styling of the new section. > > The patch is attached and can be also found online at [1] and a built > version is available at [2]. > > Thanks in advance. > > [1] http://people.freebsd.org/~danger/hast.diff > [2] http://people.freebsd.org/~danger/FreeBSD/hast.html > Hi Daniel, great writeup, this will make a good addition to the Handbook once it's finished. I've found some typos and attached a diff with corrections. I'm not an english native speaker myself (and I don't play one on TV), but I think the ones I found are pretty obvious. Kind regards Benedict Reuschling FreeBSD Doc Committer The FreeBSD Documentation Project FreeBSD German Documentation Project - https://doc.bsdgroup.de -----BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE----- Version: GnuPG v1.4.8 (Darwin) Comment: Using GnuPG with Mozilla - http://enigmail.mozdev.org/ iEYEARECAAYFAk1qY8EACgkQTSZQLkqBk0hgPwCfawrm5cf2303mPC/j3MnLjiRt 7ScAn3Wf3mDe43ubqKaAkCi8wxyccNA1 =B1Nq -----END PGP SIGNATURE----- [-- Attachment #2 --] --- hast.html 2011-02-27 15:40:32.000000000 +0100 +++ hast_new.html 2011-02-27 15:40:12.000000000 +0100 @@ -39,7 +39,7 @@ <i class="AUTHORGROUP"><span class="CONTRIB">Contributed by</span> Daniel Gerzo.</i> <i class="AUTHORGROUP"><span class="CONTRIB">With inputs from</span> Freddie Cash, Pawel -Jakub Davidek, Michael W. Lucas, and Viktor Petersson.</i> +Jakub Dawidek, Michael W. Lucas, and Viktor Petersson.</i> <div class="SECT2"> <h2 class="SECT2"><a id="AEN25130" name="AEN25130">18.18.1 Synopsis</a></h2> @@ -288,7 +288,7 @@ class="REPLACEABLE"><i>172.16.0.2</i></tt>. Both of these nodes will have a dedicated hard drive <tt class="DEVICENAME">/dev/<tt class="REPLACEABLE"><i>ad6</i></tt></tt> of the same size for <acronym class="ACRONYM" title="">HAST</acronym> operation. The -<acronym class="ACRONYM" title="">HAST</acronym> pool (sometimes also reffered to as a +<acronym class="ACRONYM" title="">HAST</acronym> pool (sometimes also referred to as a resource, i.e. the GEOM provider in <tt class="FILENAME">/dev/hast/</tt>) will be called <tt class="FILENAME"><tt class="REPLACEABLE"><i>test</i></tt></tt>.</p> @@ -458,14 +458,14 @@ <pre class="PROGRAMLISTING"> notify 30 { match "system" "IFNET"; - match "subsustem" "carp0"; + match "subsystem" "carp0"; match "type" "LINK_UP"; action "/usr/local/sbin/carp-hast-switch master"; }; notify 30 { match "system" "IFNET"; - match "subsustem" "carp0"; + match "subsystem" "carp0"; match "type" "LINK_DOWN"; action "/usr/local/sbin/carp-hast-switch slave"; }; @@ -603,7 +603,7 @@ <ul> <li> -<p>Umounts the <acronym class="ACRONYM" title="">HAST</acronym> pools.</p> +<p>Unmounts the <acronym class="ACRONYM" title="">HAST</acronym> pools.</p> </li> <li> [-- Attachment #3 --] F Mjc M&P.JH4 3j1 w$E]l CR&/*zhelp
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