Date: Mon, 13 May 2002 03:40:27 -0700 (PDT) From: Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@FreeBSD.org> To: cvs-committers@FreeBSD.org, cvs-all@FreeBSD.org Subject: cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/mh article.sgml Message-ID: <200205131040.g4DAeR790359@freefall.freebsd.org>
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keramida 2002/05/13 03:40:27 PDT
Modified files:
en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/mh article.sgml
Log:
+ Add tags to filename/command instances.
+ Add a comma to separate parts of existing sentences more clearly.
+ Change "Also you might want" to "You might also want".
+ Remove a duplicate <command>edit</command>.
+ Reword and split sentences, minor other grammar fixes.
Revision Changes Path
1.16 +15 -14 doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/mh/article.sgml
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