Date: Wed, 29 Jul 2009 16:01:51 GMT From: Glen Barber <glen.j.barber@gmail.com> To: freebsd-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org Subject: docs/137243: [patch] Minor grammatical fixes to Handbook Section 24.2.2 Message-ID: <200907291601.n6TG1ptk082497@www.freebsd.org> Resent-Message-ID: <200907291610.n6TGA4Vt051683@freefall.freebsd.org>
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>Number: 137243 >Category: docs >Synopsis: [patch] Minor grammatical fixes to Handbook Section 24.2.2 >Confidential: no >Severity: non-critical >Priority: low >Responsible: freebsd-doc >State: open >Quarter: >Keywords: >Date-Required: >Class: doc-bug >Submitter-Id: current-users >Arrival-Date: Wed Jul 29 16:10:04 UTC 2009 >Closed-Date: >Last-Modified: >Originator: Glen Barber >Release: 8.0-BETA2 >Organization: >Environment: FreeBSD orion 8.0-BETA2 FreeBSD 8.0-BETA2 #11 r195886: Sun Jul 26 05:27:01 EDT 2009 root@orion:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/ORION i386 >Description: Section 24.2.2 [1] of the handbook contains minor grammatical errors. The handbook states the following: "This entry states that once every day, the freebsd-update will be ran." This should either be: a - This entry states that once every day, freebsd-update will run. or b - This entry states that once every day, the freebsd-update utility will be run. [1] - http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/updating-upgrading-freebsdupdate.html >How-To-Repeat: >Fix: The attached patch contains a grammatical fix for the handbook, assuming the first case in the description of this PR Patch attached with submission follows: --- cutting-edge/chapter.sgml.orig 2009-07-29 11:46:13.000000000 -0400 +++ cutting-edge/chapter.sgml 2009-07-29 11:50:23.000000000 -0400 @@ -281,8 +281,8 @@ <programlisting>@daily root freebsd-update cron</programlisting> - <para>This entry states that once every day, the - <command>freebsd-update</command> will be ran. In this way, + <para>This entry states that once every day, + <command>freebsd-update</command> will run. In this way, using the <option>cron</option> argument, <command>freebsd-update</command> will only check if updates exist. If patches exist, they will automatically be downloaded >Release-Note: >Audit-Trail: >Unformatted:
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