Date: Fri, 29 Mar 2002 10:00:04 -0800 (PST) From: swear@blarg.net (Gary W. Swearingen) To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: docs/36465: [PATCH] dumpon(8) Message-ID: <200203291800.g2TI04988470@freefall.freebsd.org>
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From: swear@blarg.net (Gary W. Swearingen)
To: Tom Rhodes <darklogik@pittgoth.com>
Cc: FreeBSD-gnats-submit@FreeBSD.org
Subject: Re: docs/36465: [PATCH] dumpon(8)
Date: 29 Mar 2002 09:52:17 -0800
Tom Rhodes <darklogik@pittgoth.com> writes:
> Could you review this diff, see if this will be good for ya?
> My mdoc(7) skills arn't the best in the world ;)
Nor are mine, making testing a required part of patching.
Your diff looks good, except that the sentence starting
"In such cases use" (see below) should be removed too (it was
incorporated in the new part).
+.Xr loader 8
+must be used to enable dumps for system panics during
kernel initialization.
In such cases use
.Va dumpdev
And if you don't mind, you could remove a possible (but nonsensical)
second meaning in the new text by inserting "which occur" between
"panics" and "during" (see above). Thanks.
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