Date: Mon, 16 Dec 2002 07:55:49 -0200 From: Mario Sergio Fujikawa Ferreira <lioux@FreeBSD.org> To: Nik Clayton <nik@FreeBSD.org> Cc: FreeBSD-doc@FreeBSD.org, Giorgos Keramidas <keramida@FreeBSD.org> Subject: Re: (review plz) Documenting MASTER_SITES:n code Message-ID: <20021216095611.26672.qmail@exxodus.fedaykin.here> In-Reply-To: <20021215203950.GD2816@clan.nothing-going-on.org> References: <20021208234934.3628.qmail@exxodus.fedaykin.here> <20021215203950.GD2816@clan.nothing-going-on.org>
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On Sun, Dec 15, 2002 at 08:39:28PM +0000, Nik Clayton wrote: > On Sun, Dec 08, 2002 at 09:49:12PM -0200, Mario Sergio Fujikawa Ferreira wrote: > > That was the previous documentation. :) I've just finished > > writing a thourough documentation for MASTER_SITES:n feature. > > [...] > > > http://people.freebsd.org/~lioux/book.html.gz#PORTING-MASTER-SITES-N > > Thanks for the updates. > > Having read that, I'd tack your new section 4.4.7.2 ("Detailed > information") on to the end of the existing section. Humm, I've just updated the documentation with feedback from keramida. Could you check it? It is a lot less informal. :) And the markup is way better. > IMHO the replacement for the main body of 4.4.7 doesn't add to the > original text, and in the replacement text I'd prefer to see fewer I've just added that information as a historical background of the feature: where did it come from; as well as for creditting OpenBSD for the original idea. :) Check the updated version, I am sure there is a lot of room for improvement. hehe # sample Porters' Handbook with added section http://people.FreeBSD.org/~lioux/book.html.gz # patch against Porter's Handbook http://people.FreeBSD.org/~lioux/patch-book.sgml Regards, -- Mario S F Ferreira - DF - Brazil - "I guess this is a signature." Computer Science Undergraduate | FreeBSD Committer | CS Developer flames to beloved devnull@someotherworldbeloworabove.org feature, n: a documented bug | bug, n: an undocumented feature To Unsubscribe: send mail to majordomo@FreeBSD.org with "unsubscribe freebsd-doc" in the body of the message
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