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Date:      Thu, 13 Dec 2001 16:21:12 -0800 (PST)
From:      Hiten Pandya <hiten@uk.FreeBSD.org>
To:        freebsd-gnats-submit@freebsd.org
Subject:   docs/32818: [PATCH] - Formal Text for /docproj/who.html
Message-ID:  <200112140021.fBE0LCH00161@freefall.freebsd.org>
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>Number:         32818
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       [PATCH] - Formal Text for /docproj/who.html
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       serious
>Priority:       high
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          open
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:
>Class:          change-request
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Thu Dec 13 16:30:01 PST 2001
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator:     Hiten Pandya
>Release:        5.0-CURRENT
>Organization:
>Environment:
FreeBSD hpdi.ath.cx 5.0-CURRENT FreeBSD 5.0-CURRENT #1: Wed Dec 12 00:34:45 GMT 2001     hitenp@hpdi.ath.cx:/usr/obj/data/dev/src/sys/CURRENT5  i386

>Description:
the patch i have attached will replace some of the informal, and
sloppy (sorry bout my bluntness) bits of http://www.FreeBSD.org/docproj/who.html
with more formal text and better stucture.  The reason for this is very
obvious; translaters will find it easy to translate.

If you like the patch, submit it, dont like it? comment on it. :-)


>How-To-Repeat:
n/a / visit http://www.FreeBSD.org/docproj/who.html
>Fix:
*** who.sgml.old        Thu Dec 13 23:34:07 2001
--- who.sgml    Thu Dec 13 23:47:14 2001
***************
*** 13,25 ****
        <a href="mailto:FreeBSD-doc@FreeBSD.ORG">FreeBSD-doc@FreeBSD.ORG</a>.</p>
  
      <p>Some of us can commit changes directly to the FreeBSD documentation
!       tree. The complete list of people with commit ``privs'' is in <a
!       href="../handbook/staff-doc.html">the
!       Handbook</a>.</p>
      
!     <p>Others do not have commit privs, but they write and <a
!       href="submitting.html">submit documentation</a> nonetheless. One of the
!       committers will then include it in the documentation set.</p>
      
      <p>If you want to help out with the documentation project (and I fervently
        hope you do) all you have to do is subscribe to the mailing list and
--- 13,27 ----
        <a href="mailto:FreeBSD-doc@FreeBSD.ORG">FreeBSD-doc@FreeBSD.ORG</a>.</p>
  
      <p>Some of us can commit changes directly to the FreeBSD documentation
!       tree. The complete list of people with commit ``privileges'' can be 
!       found in the <a href="../handbook/staff-doc.html">Handbook</a>.</p>
      
!     <p>The general public  does not have commit privilges, but they write and 
!     <b>submit documentation</b> nonetheless. Once the documenation has been 
!     submitted according to the procedure layed out on the 
!     <a href="submitting.html"><b>Submitting Documentation</b></a> page, it will
!     be noticed by one of the committers and will be reviewed &amp; committed.
!     </p>
      
      <p>If you want to help out with the documentation project (and I fervently
        hope you do) all you have to do is subscribe to the mailing list and
***************
*** 27,32 ****
        project.</p>
  
        <p></p><a href="docproj.html">FreeBSD Documentation Project Home</a>
! &footer
    </body>
  </html>
--- 29,34 ----
        project.</p>
  
        <p></p><a href="docproj.html">FreeBSD Documentation Project Home</a>
!    &footer;
    </body>
  </html>

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