Date: Mon, 14 Feb 2011 19:10:09 GMT From: Jason Helfman <jhelfman@e-e.com> To: freebsd-doc@FreeBSD.org Subject: Re: docs/154766: [PATCH] Fix typos in freebsd-update-server article Message-ID: <201102141910.p1EJA9Sw092381@freefall.freebsd.org>
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The following reply was made to PR docs/154766; it has been noted by GNATS.
From: Jason Helfman <jhelfman@e-e.com>
To: Sahil Tandon <sahil@FreeBSD.org>
Cc: bug-followup@freebsd.org, doc@FreeBSD.org
Subject: Re: docs/154766: [PATCH] Fix typos in freebsd-update-server article
Date: Mon, 14 Feb 2011 10:59:52 -0800
Adding a grammatical fix to this, as well. I am okay with this fix.
Index: en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-update-server/article.sgml
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RCS file: /home/jhelfman/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-update-server/article.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.1
diff -u -r1.1 article.sgml
--- en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-update-server/article.sgml 13 Feb 2011 17:53:26 -0000 1.1
+++ en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-update-server/article.sgml 14 Feb 2011 18:53:16 -0000
@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@
url="&url.base;/cgi/cvsweb.cgi/projects/freebsd-update-server/">freebsd-update-server</ulink> software
is written by &a.cperciva;, current Security Officer of &os;.
For users that think it is convenient to update their systems
- against an official update server, building an own &fbus.ap; may
+ against an official update server, building their own &fbus.ap; may
help to extend its functionality by supporting manually-tweaked
&os; releases or by providing a local mirror that will allow faster
updates for a number of machines.</para>
@@ -125,7 +125,7 @@
It is sourced during all build operations.</para>
<para>Here is the default <filename>build.conf</filename>, which should
- be modified to suite your own environment.</para>
+ be modified to suit your own environment.</para>
<programlisting>
@@ -789,7 +789,7 @@
<para>Adding <option>-j <replaceable>NUMBER</replaceable></option>
flags to <maketarget>buildworld</maketarget> and
<maketarget>obj</maketarget> targets in the
- <filename>scripts/build.subr</filename> script, may speed up
+ <filename>scripts/build.subr</filename> script may speed up
processing depending on the hardware used, however it is not
necessary. Using these flags in other targets is not
recommended, as it may cause the build to become unreliable.</para>
--
Jason Helfman
System Administrator
experts-exchange.com
http://www.experts-exchange.com/M_4830110.html
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