Date: Sun, 13 Jan 2013 08:58:50 -0800 (PST) From: Dru Lavigne <dru.lavigne@att.net> To: freebsd-doc@freebsd.org Subject: Re: [patch] content changes to X11 chapter Message-ID: <1358096330.196.YahooMailClassic@web184906.mail.gq1.yahoo.com> In-Reply-To: <50F2CC15.3070800@FreeBSD.org>
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=0A=0A> >> On Fri, Jan 11, 2013 at 02:31:52PM -0800, Dru=0A> Lavigne wrote:= =0A> >>> Attached is the svn diff for the X11 chapter.=0A> This=0A> >> repr= esents a=0A> >>> complete content update of this chapter.=0A> >>> =0A> >>> = Igor is mostly happy. I think the remaining=0A> indent=0A> >> errors are fa= lse=0A> >>> warnings as they only occur when an inline tag=0A> is in=0A> >>= the previous=0A> >>> <para>.=0A> >>> =0A> >>> I did not verify the widescr= een settings. I=0A> think the=0A> >> i810 section is=0A> >>> correct. The K= DM section needs more content.=0A> Other than=0A> >> that, it is a=0A> >>> = decent first pass at bringing this chapter into=0A> the=0A> >> 21st century= .=0A> >>> =0A> >> =0A> >> Some thoughts:=0A> >> =0A> >> - the whole diff wi= ll be difficult to read for a=0A> translator: =0A> >> section moves, whites= pace & content changes,=0A> etc. It will be=0A> >> important to commit in s= eparate parts: for example:=0A> 1st section =0A> >> moves/removals, 2nd add= ition & content changes=0A> and 3rd =0A> >> whitespace/indentation changes;= =0A> >> =0A> >> - you removed the prerequisite of knowing how to=0A> use po= rts, I=0A> >> think it's important to know how to get a ports=0A> tree befo= re using=0A> >> the ports;=0A> >> =0A> >> - you removed the way to get a lo= calized keyboard=0A> for people not=0A> >> using a desktop manager.=A0 Well= this=0A> configuration is not easy to=0A> >> guess for a newcomer.=A0 Mayb= e it can be kept=0A> somewhere in the =0A> >> chapter.=0A> >> =0A> >> - Wha= t is # in Crtl+Alt+F#?=0A> > =0A> > =0A> > Please note that the whitespace = changes were sent as a=0A> separate=0A> > patch ([patch] white space only f= ix for handbook x11=0A> chapter) on=0A> > the 10th. It is my understanding = that the first patch=0A> will be=0A> > applied to the handbook repo while t= he second content=0A> patch will=0A> > most likely be applied to the print = edition repo.=0A=0A=0AMy bad, I didn't realize the white-space patch had al= ready been committed. I will redo this and send the patches by Tuesday.=0A= =0ACheers,=0A=0ADru
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